Dreamscape

DREAMSCAPE


jailbird l l l l  bars l l l l l horizontal
free _ _ _ flying _ _ _ stairs
angel fish escape t a i l s fluid in space black and white stripes dream on hardboard bunks open bars release drinks aquarium fish float on top of their self-built boat awakened by r e a l i t y the constant clang clang clang eyes fight to open blackbird nightmares hover a white dove weeps 7/28/2017
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Krampe Avatar
August 1, 2017 at 10:35 AM
Congrats on your win, Kim. Your interesting poem does have a dream like quality, the weird associations dreams have just before one wakes.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 1, 2017 at 10:53 AM
Thanks! That's what I was going for! Funny, my inspiration was this piece in the movie, "Despicable Me 3." Showed minions behind bars, then the bars turned into stairs. A lightbulb moment...lol!
Cozart Avatar
August 1, 2017 at 10:30 AM
Congrats on your win, Kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 1, 2017 at 10:53 AM
Thanks, Dale!
Barden Avatar
July 31, 2017 at 9:14 PM
Very unusual poem and shape, and I love it completely, (as I do all your work, Kim) ... congrats on a well-deserved win! :-) <3
Rodrigues Avatar
July 31, 2017 at 9:16 PM
Thank you, Greg!
Ashley Avatar
July 31, 2017 at 6:01 PM
Hi Kim, this is fantastic. Congratulations on your win :)
Rodrigues Avatar
July 31, 2017 at 7:09 PM
Thank you, Susan!
Andresen Avatar
July 29, 2017 at 12:13 PM
- Great written and shape, Kim :) - Well done - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
July 29, 2017 at 9:25 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
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