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Dreamscape

DREAMSCAPE jailbird l l l l bars l l l l l horizontal
free _ _ _ flying _ _ _ stairs
angel fish escape t a i l s fluid in space black and white stripes dream on hardboard bunks open bars release drinks aquarium fish float on top of their self-built boat awakened by r e a l i t y the constant clang clang clang eyes fight to open blackbird nightmares hover a white dove weeps 7/28/2017

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Date: 8/1/2017 10:35:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Kim. Your interesting poem does have a dream like quality, the weird associations dreams have just before one wakes.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/1/2017 10:53:00 AM
Thanks! That's what I was going for! Funny, my inspiration was this piece in the movie, "Despicable Me 3." Showed minions behind bars, then the bars turned into stairs. A lightbulb moment...lol!
Date: 8/1/2017 10:30:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/1/2017 10:53:00 AM
Thanks, Dale!
Date: 7/31/2017 9:14:00 PM
Very unusual poem and shape, and I love it completely, (as I do all your work, Kim) ... congrats on a well-deserved win! :-) <3
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/31/2017 9:16:00 PM
Thank you, Greg!
Date: 7/31/2017 6:01:00 PM
Hi Kim, this is fantastic. Congratulations on your win :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/31/2017 7:09:00 PM
Thank you, Susan!
Date: 7/29/2017 12:13:00 PM
- Great written and shape, Kim :) - Well done - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/29/2017 9:25:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!

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