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Dreamscape

Inside a deep casket of a dream I hear the falls drop in soothing rhythm natural as breathing. I look up at a light so bright I squint jostling me awake clutching precious gems of nature's beauty and amazing grace.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/29/2015 3:17:00 AM
That's a lovely poem, Josefina.
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Date: 7/26/2015 12:13:00 AM
JOSEFINA:) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Josefina Costales
Date: 7/26/2015 8:21:00 AM
Thanks, as I asked Lyric Man, where or when can I see this feature.
Date: 6/26/2015 5:34:00 PM
Very impressive use of metaphors in this one..I enjoyed reading it today..I have been having some dreams that seem like a casket..Thanks for dropping by..Good to see you here on soup..Welcome.Sara
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Josefina Costales
Date: 6/27/2015 8:23:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed it, thanks Sara

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