Dreamscape

Inside a deep casket of a dream
I hear the falls drop in soothing rhythm
natural as breathing.
I look up at a light so bright I squint
jostling me awake clutching precious gems
of nature's beauty and amazing grace.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Ward Avatar
July 29, 2015 at 3:17 AM
That's a lovely poem, Josefina.
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July 26, 2015 at 12:13 AM
JOSEFINA:) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
Costales Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 8:21 AM
Thanks, as I asked Lyric Man, where or when can I see this feature.
Kendrick Avatar
June 26, 2015 at 5:34 PM
Very impressive use of metaphors in this one..I enjoyed reading it today..I have been having some dreams that seem like a casket..Thanks for dropping by..Good to see you here on soup..Welcome.Sara
Costales Avatar
June 27, 2015 at 8:23 PM
Glad you enjoyed it, thanks Sara
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