Dreamscape

In a tranquil valley with banks dark and deep
Silted streams into dreary conduits seep

Shadows bearing yesterday's light on addled walls creep
Images from the dark recesses around each corner peep

Enchanting winds over the heightened senses do sweep
Animated figures from the bleary crevasses leap

Sorrowful clouds hover; o'er conscience penitent tears weep
In foggy redoubt, guarded fears and  insecurities do heap

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 12/4/2012 12:45:00 AM
Awesome,,,I see why you won,,,,, very nice ;}
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Date: 12/3/2012 7:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your super placement in Michael's "Deep Dreams" contest Stephen. I am sorry this is late. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/26/2012 3:28:00 PM
The memories of musings so deep in the night. You've described so vividly with your insight. To travel this land where conciesness goes.
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Date: 11/23/2012 6:01:00 PM
Congrats on your winning entry..Sara
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Date: 11/23/2012 5:55:00 PM
Stephen, congratulations!;-) With your "deep dream" win in Michael's awesome contest. Good night~PD
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Date: 11/23/2012 9:35:00 AM
congrats stephen, this is a wonderful number one...
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Date: 11/23/2012 8:51:00 AM
Congrats Stephen on your well deserve win. Beautiful write. Love and best wishes..Ravindra
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Date: 11/23/2012 6:45:00 AM
This is a fantastic write!! Congratulations on a well-deserved win!
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Date: 11/23/2012 6:00:00 AM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 11/23/2012 5:58:00 AM
Congratulations Stephen xx
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Date: 11/23/2012 5:40:00 AM
congratulations Stephen ...Seren
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Date: 11/23/2012 5:38:00 AM
Congrats on 1st place in my Deep Dream contest.. loved your entry!!! Michael
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