Dreams Within Dreams

Under the canopy of pine trees, 
We lie watching the peaks of mountains 
Crowned in white and wearing stony brown.
We take flights to majestic heights
To see views from the summits’ tops. 

Dreams fulfilled, we fly back on a high
And land on the remnant of pine leaves
Where we lie, you and I, wide-awake.
Ever in the mode to propel me to fly,
You are my dream-drive, in blossom,
 
Residing in the warmth of my bosom,
In a niche that you have dug deep
And which you have never quit,
Forever forgiving your companion 
For his shifting sights, pine tree high

Piercing the sky, and buoyantly green, 
Quivering like pine branches,  
Leaving him with no breathing space
To take life in slow motion and meditate, 
To bring a shade of stability to his life.

You have left me high dreams to nurture.
I have bartered some for pieces of gold
But some you have treasured for me
To fall upon when inconsistency filled my life
And buds of high dreams 

Started wilting before their bloom.
Then, in a soft gesture, you will open your chest 
And grant me some of those jewels
Which in their flawless forms
Will glitter like shining stars.

A life's stretch is finite.
A day will come when I’ll feel fatigued.
Then, in a meditative silence, you and I, 
We will lie under this canopy  
And gaze at the clear blue sky.
 
The sky will take on a dreamy look
Embroidered with resplendent stars 
To salute my companion and me, lying-in-state.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 4/18/2020 12:38:00 PM
What a majestic portrayal of how our eyes see love. Love this poem Pramod!
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Date: 4/13/2020 6:46:00 PM
beautiful imagery and wonderfully penned... congratulations on your win :)
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Pramod Rastogi
Date: 4/16/2020 5:09:00 AM
Thanks, Sandra, It's always great to get such nice feedback. Pramod
Date: 4/13/2020 2:14:00 PM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Pramond ... beautiful to read :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Pramod Rastogi
Date: 4/16/2020 5:07:00 AM
So kind of you, Anne-Lise, Thanks, Pramod
Date: 4/13/2020 11:59:00 AM
Wow, that final verse! Congratulations on first place, Pramod!
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Pramod Rastogi
Date: 4/16/2020 5:04:00 AM
Thanks, Kim, for your kind words, Pramod
Date: 4/13/2020 11:13:00 AM
Stunning write, Pramond, you've made me see the surroundings in a different light of bliss. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Pramod Rastogi
Date: 4/16/2020 5:04:00 AM
Thanks, Eve, for your so inspiring words. Pramod
Date: 4/13/2020 8:39:00 AM
Congratulations Pramod! Very well composed and the last stanza is touching! Great image in my mind you created too! Enjoy the break during the lockdown!
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Pramod Rastogi
Date: 4/16/2020 5:02:00 AM
Thanks, Krish, for your very kind and inspiring words. Pramod
Date: 4/13/2020 6:59:00 AM
This is a wonderful poem, it is a shame no one reads your poems... How beautiful when we are tired and we can lie next to the one we love... Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Pramod Rastogi
Date: 4/16/2020 5:00:00 AM
Full credit goes to you, my friend, for providing us with these inspiring lines. Thanks, Pramod
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