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To lounge beneath a passing star Where unfulfilled dreams wane, afar No fog or glow cleansing these tears As grief, in harsh shadow appears Entombing bleakest thoughts, I sink-- This agony… my poisoned drink. ' No one ever told me that grief felt so like fear.' ~ C.S.Lewis 8/30/2019 Writing Challenge 3, August 2019 - Six Lines Sponsor, Dear Heart- Wiishkobi Ode

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Date: 9/10/2019 8:23:00 AM
Nette, I have tasted from that bitter cup and your work carries the aftertaste of poisoned pain.. you are brilliant in every way and I find your works a partner on the mountain and a companion in the valley. In both I find comfort! I love C.S. Lewis as well and his quote is perfect for this incredible write.. not one word wasted!
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Date: 9/7/2019 7:30:00 PM
Hello nette … another lovely poem from your pen nette - thank you - Lindsay
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Date: 9/4/2019 5:08:00 PM
Nette..congratulations, my friend.Love your poetry. Your fan, Panagiota
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Date: 9/3/2019 3:39:00 PM
nette, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with your wonderful couplet poem, I love your quote and the image is awesome too !
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Date: 9/2/2019 5:32:00 PM
deep and sad Nette, congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/2/2019 12:30:00 PM
- Congratulations on your great 4th place, Nette :) - happy hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/2/2019 11:16:00 AM
Nette congrats on your beautiful win!;)
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Date: 9/2/2019 10:52:00 AM
Nicely penned, Nette, congrats on your win. Hugs, John
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Date: 9/1/2019 5:15:00 AM
Hi my talented friend and poet, as usual a gem of a poem - an intense write which I am certain will be a win. Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 8/31/2019 6:24:00 PM
Very powerful Nette. Well written :)
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Date: 8/31/2019 12:37:00 PM
Bit sad, but lovely..well written, as always.
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