Nette Onclaud Poet Couplet

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Dreams Unfulfilled

To lounge beneath a passing star
      Where unfulfilled dreams wane, afar
         No fog or glow cleansing these tears
     As grief, in harsh shadow   appears
   Entombing bleakest thoughts, I sink--
This agony… my poisoned drink.





' No one ever told me that grief felt so like fear.' ~ C.S.Lewis

8/30/2019
Writing Challenge 3, August 2019 - Six Lines
Sponsor, Dear Heart- Wiishkobi Ode

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Lindsay Laurie September 7, 2019 at 7:30 PM Hello nette … another lovely poem from your pen nette - thank you - Lindsay

Panagiota Romios September 4, 2019 at 5:08 PM Nette..congratulations, my friend.Love your poetry. Your fan, Panagiota

Constance La France September 3, 2019 at 3:39 PM nette, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with your wonderful couplet poem, I love your quote and the image is awesome too !

Jan Allison September 2, 2019 at 5:32 PM deep and sad Nette, congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen September 2, 2019 at 12:30 PM - Congratulations on your great 4th place, Nette :) - happy hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Brenda Chiri September 2, 2019 at 11:16 AM Nette congrats on your beautiful win!;)

John Gondolf September 2, 2019 at 10:52 AM Nicely penned, Nette, congrats on your win. Hugs, John

Jennifer Proxenos September 1, 2019 at 5:15 AM Hi my talented friend and poet, as usual a gem of a poem - an intense write which I am certain will be a win. Hugs, Jennifer.

Heidi Sands August 31, 2019 at 6:24 PM Very powerful Nette. Well written :)

Vijay Pandit August 31, 2019 at 12:37 PM Bit sad, but lovely..well written, as always.