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Dreams of the Sun

Beyond the golden horizon she dwells lightening up more than just a dream shadows teasingly move along with every movement made playing out tantalizing possibilities where into my visions she lies warmth simple warmth lain at the foot of discovery washing the worry away dreams simple dreams of the sun where days never fade and love sits a heartbeat away

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Phillip Garcia

Date: 12/10/2018 6:49:00 PM

My favorite collection of poetry are the Erotic writes of E.E. Cummings' - I bring that up now bc I realized, while reading another one of your gems, just how refreshing and nice it is when a poet writes something that you can make sense initially as opposed to what my pal Ernest does. Enjoyed this very much too. Wouldn't it be great if we could center the main titles on here? This would look very dapper with Dreams of the Sun set directly atop.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 11/27/2018 3:39:00 AM

You are so dreamyyyyyyyyyy Hugs!!!!! :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 11/27/2018 3:38:00 AM

I will have what you having! I like those dreams!!!

Jan Allison

Date: 11/27/2018 1:01:00 AM

So romantic Tim, a lovely poem to wake up to this freezing cold morning!:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 11/26/2018 9:55:00 PM

I wish I had your vision and your romantic heart :) lovely write like always .... Stay warm my friend

Brandy Nicole

Date: 11/26/2018 7:12:00 PM

As the sunshine lingers, simply cascading shadows upon the skin. It is beautiful indeed, simply captivating. Truly mesmerizing. Your thoughts are dreamy and romantic. :) Brandy

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/26/2018 6:33:00 PM

This is so nice Tim! Peaceful and loving :)