Carrie Richards Poet Haiku

Dreams of the Rice Field

bemused light
falls to the ground....
moon cradles me

fingers on lips
amber disappears...
dewy mouth of mirth

whispered words
porcelain meanings... 
incipient snows of sleep



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Joe Maverick's Contest: Sake From Noritake Haiku Challenge

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Carol Sunshine Brown August 10, 2012 at 5:26 AM Congratulations on your win in Joe's "Haiku Challenge" contest Carrie. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich August 6, 2012 at 2:54 PM I love everything about yours, even the title, and the way you used human elements mixed with nature. big congrats. splendid job.

Nette Onclaud August 6, 2012 at 12:40 AM spell binding elegance and beauty, carrie.. congrats on your stunning win!..:) huggs!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders August 5, 2012 at 1:22 PM Carrie, I am always in awe of the beauty in your poetry...congrats on another wonderful win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Lee Ramage August 5, 2012 at 12:27 PM Hi Carrie, you truly have a gift. This poem is beautiful. Well done, so well written. Lee

David Williams August 5, 2012 at 11:50 AM Carrie congrats on your win, love it...David

Andrea Dietrich May 23, 2012 at 8:56 AM gosh, these just glide off the tongue. So beautiful, happy BIRTHDAY May baby, sorry I missed your day. I can't believe how much I love May people. There are at least six of them here, all super cool personalities. (Taurus is my moon sign and I am happy to be a Virgo/Taurus!)

Russell Sivey May 22, 2012 at 9:13 PM What a fantastic and glorious write my friend! I really enjoyed the way you put the poem together and how well you used the Haiku!! Wonderful, perfect poem that you have written! Great Work!!