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Dreams of the Rice Field

bemused light falls to the ground.... moon cradles me fingers on lips amber disappears... dewy mouth of mirth whispered words porcelain meanings... incipient snows of sleep " " " " Joe Maverick's Contest: Sake From Noritake Haiku Challenge

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/10/2012 5:26:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Joe's "Haiku Challenge" contest Carrie. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/6/2012 2:54:00 PM

I love everything about yours, even the title, and the way you used human elements mixed with nature. big congrats. splendid job.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/6/2012 12:40:00 AM

spell binding elegance and beauty, carrie.. congrats on your stunning win!..:) huggs!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 8/5/2012 1:22:00 PM

Carrie, I am always in awe of the beauty in your poetry...congrats on another wonderful win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Lee Ramage

Date: 8/5/2012 12:27:00 PM

Hi Carrie, you truly have a gift. This poem is beautiful. Well done, so well written. Lee

David Williams

Date: 8/5/2012 11:50:00 AM

Carrie congrats on your win, love it...David

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/23/2012 8:56:00 AM

gosh, these just glide off the tongue. So beautiful, happy BIRTHDAY May baby, sorry I missed your day. I can't believe how much I love May people. There are at least six of them here, all super cool personalities. (Taurus is my moon sign and I am happy to be a Virgo/Taurus!)

Russell Sivey

Date: 5/22/2012 9:13:00 PM

What a fantastic and glorious write my friend! I really enjoyed the way you put the poem together and how well you used the Haiku!! Wonderful, perfect poem that you have written! Great Work!!