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Dreams of the last days

Dreams of the last days Whenever I have a dream/ I arise and start to scream. Everything I see is about death/ I fear being the only person left. My loved ones are all decease/ A big piece of my life will never rest in peace. Slowly fading away from me/ Emptiness I feel in my heart and there you will see. What is left of my soul died when I was born?/ The spiritual part is now forever gone. Floating away in the open wind/ Father, please forgive me I have commit a sin. The mayhem and the buried I cast upon myself will never be removed/ The directions I am in will never be smooth. The scar I have engrave inside of me/ Will forever show a unique side that is never free. Runs throughout my body deep with in my skin/ Where it will not be able to mend. Like one to three degree burns/ When giving life you must accept when it is your turn.

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Date: 11/23/2022 1:35:00 AM
curious why you use /. sometimes I use an extra , for example ,,, to indicate an extra pause
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Leotis Hargrove
Date: 12/20/2022 12:15:00 PM
Noel, Thank you for that. I can not say why i have been doing it. I guess its a habit i have to break and take extra time and care from my next poems. Thank you for your time and thoughts. Happy Holidays!!!!