Tim Smith Poet Free verse

Dreams of Snow Angels

Another sweltering day

soaking up  all the summer sun has to offer

The trade winds blow but offer no relief

slowly I sip on a frozen peach margarita

ice cold to the touch, but melting fast

water droplets roll down cooling my wrist

bringing back memories

memories of that cool December day

your first taste of snow

how I didn't even know

that gleam in your eye

when we made those snow angels

they seemed to come alive 

all those laughs, your giggle

so much more than a memory

building that tiny igloo

you dragging me in

giving me that big kiss

for the night, the perfect inn

hot cocoa sitting round the open fire

you in my arms

you captured my heart 

and all my desire

such a sweet time.

Opening my eyes I turn to you

half-asleep on that chaise lounge

kiss your hand

and whisper I love you

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Matthew Anish August 29, 2015 at 9:04 PM Sweet winter scene - well drawn! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Kp Nunez August 26, 2015 at 1:45 PM A lovely and warm scene you have created for a December romance, Tim. Good one! Kim

Andrea Dietrich August 25, 2015 at 3:48 PM Wintry warm love song! Beautiful, Tim.

Anne-Lise Andresen August 25, 2015 at 1:16 PM - Trying to update me a bit .... - Beautiful memories of playing in the snow, my friend Tim .... warm kisses .... warms cold bodies - Oh, how many angels I have made in the snow ..... while I looks up at stars and moon...... yes, "such a sweet time" :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis August 25, 2015 at 10:23 AM If Carol crowns you a King I crown you an Emperor my friend, Tim!

Carol Eastman August 25, 2015 at 9:50 AM Hello there Timothy Smith... Your romance gives me such a kick... It's not a myth... You weave beauty better than a great silver smith... So I crown you King of all the romantics, forth with...

Jack Ellison August 25, 2015 at 9:27 AM Now how can I compete with this, I ask you! STUNNING!!!

Len Gasun August 25, 2015 at 7:39 AM Very sweet memories expressed creatively in your very beautiful poem my dear friend, Tim. I enjoyed so much the read tonight. Thank you so much for sharing! Thank you so much as well for your precious time stopping by reading our collaboration poem. Have a great day! love lots and biggest hug, Leonora

Eve Roper August 24, 2015 at 5:40 PM wonderful write, of all the years that I lived up north I never even thought to make a snow angel, probably because it was to cold now that I think about it I'm glad I didn't tooooo cold. a 7 hugs eve

Charmaine Chircop August 24, 2015 at 4:43 PM You have a unique way of expressing emotions..You create a movie in the reader's mind.So so warm and beautiful this is..and that snow angel..Still didnt manage to be one darn..I really need to travel again at Christmas time and hopefully find enough snow.You seemed to have plenty there..Yes snow for me means fun ...and yr poem transmits that fun feeling indeed..A fav!

Kim Merryman August 24, 2015 at 4:29 PM Tim, you write such beautiful, romantic poems! I love the visuals this piece brings to mind. Love, Kim

Jan Allison August 24, 2015 at 4:16 PM this is so lovely Tim. I wrote a poem about a snow angel - i found the poem on the web and a photographer had added the most stunning picture of a baby as a snow angel - it melts your heart - must get permission to post it on my poem and page:-) hugs Jan xx7

Afolabi Muideen August 24, 2015 at 3:59 PM A stunning write here, I love wonderful piece, it is excellence and eloquence..........A.M.