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Dreams of Snow Angels

Another sweltering day soaking up all the summer sun has to offer The trade winds blow but offer no relief slowly I sip on a frozen peach margarita ice cold to the touch, but melting fast water droplets roll down cooling my wrist bringing back memories memories of that cool December day your first taste of snow how I didn't even know that gleam in your eye when we made those snow angels they seemed to come alive all those laughs, your giggle so much more than a memory building that tiny igloo you dragging me in giving me that big kiss for the night, the perfect inn hot cocoa sitting round the open fire you in my arms you captured my heart and all my desire such a sweet time. Opening my eyes I turn to you half-asleep on that chaise lounge kiss your hand and whisper I love you

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Date: 8/29/2015 9:04:00 PM
Sweet winter scene - well drawn! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 8/26/2015 1:45:00 PM
A lovely and warm scene you have created for a December romance, Tim. Good one! Kim
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Date: 8/25/2015 3:48:00 PM
Wintry warm love song! Beautiful, Tim.
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Date: 8/25/2015 1:16:00 PM
- Trying to update me a bit .... - Beautiful memories of playing in the snow, my friend Tim .... warm kisses .... warms cold bodies - Oh, how many angels I have made in the snow ..... while I looks up at stars and moon...... yes, "such a sweet time" :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/25/2015 10:23:00 AM
If Carol crowns you a King I crown you an Emperor my friend, Tim!
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Date: 8/25/2015 9:50:00 AM
Hello there Timothy Smith... Your romance gives me such a kick... It's not a myth... You weave beauty better than a great silver smith... So I crown you King of all the romantics, forth with...
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Date: 8/25/2015 9:27:00 AM
Now how can I compete with this, I ask you! STUNNING!!!
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Date: 8/25/2015 7:39:00 AM
Very sweet memories expressed creatively in your very beautiful poem my dear friend, Tim. I enjoyed so much the read tonight. Thank you so much for sharing! Thank you so much as well for your precious time stopping by reading our collaboration poem. Have a great day! love lots and biggest hug, Leonora
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Date: 8/24/2015 5:40:00 PM
wonderful write, of all the years that I lived up north I never even thought to make a snow angel, probably because it was to cold now that I think about it I'm glad I didn't tooooo cold. a 7 hugs eve
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Date: 8/24/2015 4:43:00 PM
You have a unique way of expressing emotions..You create a movie in the reader's mind.So so warm and beautiful this is..and that snow angel..Still didnt manage to be one darn..I really need to travel again at Christmas time and hopefully find enough snow.You seemed to have plenty there..Yes snow for me means fun ...and yr poem transmits that fun feeling indeed..A fav!
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Date: 8/24/2015 4:29:00 PM
Tim, you write such beautiful, romantic poems! I love the visuals this piece brings to mind. Love, Kim
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Date: 8/24/2015 4:16:00 PM
this is so lovely Tim. I wrote a poem about a snow angel - i found the poem on the web and a photographer had added the most stunning picture of a baby as a snow angel - it melts your heart - must get permission to post it on my poem and page:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Date: 8/24/2015 3:59:00 PM
A stunning write here, I love wonderful piece, it is excellence and eloquence..........A.M.
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