Dreams of Happiness

On the sea of joy
I sail my boat of sorrow
with my oars of pain
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Orozco Avatar
May 6, 2009 at 3:29 PM
Love it! This is awesome I'm new to haiku and senryu lol did I spell it right thanks for your warm comments Daniel. - yours truly jeremiah
Edmonds Avatar
January 17, 2009 at 11:29 PM
Awesome senryu Daniel, It spoke volumes. Great job! I liked it. ~Caramel
Gass Avatar
January 7, 2009 at 9:09 PM
Great senryu, Daniel. the imagery is great and the sentiment, heartfelt. Awesome job! Love, Robin
Moreno Avatar
January 7, 2009 at 5:03 PM
Great words you've penned today Daniel. I like the depth of this thought. Good job...Raul
Bolton Avatar
January 7, 2009 at 1:55 PM
Nice usage of words here . . . The senryu has never been written better . . .
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