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Dreams of Forever

Come and take my hand Hold me close and don't let go Forever entwined

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 6/19/2018 9:05:00 AM

Dear Shannon, hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. I find a tear in my eye after reading this Magnificent Masterpiece of a Senryu. I think there is a link between YOUR Heart and mine. This Superb POEM reminds me of an Eternal LOVE. I use the word Entwine a lot in my POETRY. of an Eternal LOVE. I use the word Entwine a lot in my POETRY. I offer sincere Congratulations on YOUR Win. LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...HG Congratulations

Skat A

Date: 11/19/2011 7:11:00 AM

A very intense dream Shannon, I love the feeling of holding of forever. Entwined in a dream, how romantic' Siddy (soup mail)

Ashek Rahaman

Date: 11/16/2011 9:25:00 AM

love your poems shannon

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 10/30/2011 10:05:00 AM

* “Your Lovely Treasures Inspired Myself This Early Morn * I Hope That You Do Not Mind, Yet * Beauty Is Beauty * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Shannon * As For Your Beauties Lovely Poetry Here * Tis But A Dream That One Dreams * When Finding A Jewel Which Shines Sooo Bright * I Am Going to Love Your Splendours Verse * I Can Feel It * Deep Inside * My Luv, Always, Sarah.” *

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 10/29/2011 6:25:00 PM

* “Ow * I Have Afore Been Here * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Shannon * It Must Have Been The Title * Luv * Sarah.” *

Don Johnson

Date: 10/27/2011 6:26:00 PM

never unwind unplanned, never mind how dry, the sand:) confused me too...

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 10/27/2011 5:43:00 PM

* “Ow * This Is Beautiful Shannon * But Not As Beautiful As Finding Your Loveliness Amid My Com Box * Sooo Very Sweet * And Yesss, A Soft, Warm & Lovely Hand to Hold * Causes My Heart to Skip A Beat * Beautiful Shannon * Luv * Sarah.” *