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Dreams 'Modern Cinquain'

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Dreams 'Modern Cinquain'

Seem real
People we see
Gone but not forgotten

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 5/23/2012 12:48:00 PM
Thanks for always stopping by! Light & Love
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Date: 5/23/2012 10:31:00 AM
Nice, I like it. TLH
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Date: 3/21/2012 4:02:00 PM
Hi Carol - Love the simplicity of the way the poem is set up and yet says so much. - Gail
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Date: 3/21/2012 5:30:00 AM
Light but heavy. Love this one.
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Date: 3/12/2012 8:51:00 AM
Inspiring, or a nightmare! ha! Isn't it funny how the mind works? I still have dreams about my best friend in high school who I haven't seen in over 15 years! So strange. Anyway, some dreams are very life-like - have you seen the movie "Inception"?
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Date: 3/12/2012 8:08:00 AM
I lost a loved one this past year and it is hard to move on. Poetry helps.
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Date: 3/12/2012 7:56:00 AM
so very true my dear i hope your keep well you and your family love duncan,ceizar,and our sons
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Date: 3/12/2012 12:56:00 AM
Lovely Cinquain Carol. It is a short verse but meaningful. Thank you for your inspiring words at my work. Love Dalila
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Date: 3/11/2012 3:47:00 PM
This is so profound, so much said with so little. harry
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Date: 3/11/2012 10:56:00 AM
Your Poems and words are getting deeper and deeper like the mystery of Life. The real beauty of your great Poems is their simplicity in which you take up the most vivid ideas of Life. Great write Carol as always and thank you for your kind words on my featured Poem. Love and best wishes always....Ravindra...Carol Brown
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Date: 3/10/2012 8:33:00 PM
oh so true Carol.. this week I have dreamed every night of relatives deceased and beyond the realm of Earth.. thankxx for sharing this rare beauty of truth luv..
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Date: 3/10/2012 7:12:00 PM
Lovely, I love dreams and remembrance, well done.
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Date: 3/9/2012 7:43:00 PM
people who touch lives are always remembered... lovely read, carol...:) huggs!
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Date: 3/9/2012 3:24:00 PM
Lovely piece on our dreams, Carol. And so true
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Date: 3/9/2012 4:18:00 PM
Thank you Jack
Date: 3/9/2012 3:17:00 PM
I LIKE this, CAROL!!!
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Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 3/9/2012 4:18:00 PM
Thank you Andrea
Date: 3/9/2012 1:40:00 PM
Enjoyed your poetry Carol, have a great day, love,vie
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Date: 3/9/2012 1:17:00 PM
Yes, sometimes we have night dreams and sometimes day dreams where the deceased seem to come to us..Enjoyed reading your creative work..Thanks for stopping by, reading and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 3/9/2012 9:18:00 AM
Enjoyed your Cinquain Carol this morning. love phyl
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Date: 3/9/2012 7:55:00 AM
My thanks to you Ms. Brown for your welcome to the soup pot. The lone comment on an echo of my heart was warmly recieved. Again, many thank-yous.
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Date: 3/9/2012 7:51:00 AM
Well, that happened to me. very inspiring carol..more writings.....
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