Subimal Sinha-Roy Poet Senryu

Dreams In Eyeful Tears

broken heart floats on
hidden stream of eyeful tears…
dreams turn twilight blur

June 2, 2019
Syllable count 5/7/5
checked on howmanysyllables.com
Contest : Writing Challenge 5, May 2019, Senryu
Sponsor : Dear Heart

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Andrea Dietrich June 10, 2019 at 3:44 PM very interestingly descriptive words, Subimal. Congrats on your win.

Constance La France June 10, 2019 at 11:08 AM Subimal congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful Senryu ~

Anne-Lise Andresen June 3, 2019 at 11:24 AM - Very well written, Subimal ... luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)