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dreams heart beat

Like pink and glass stairing up and down Your glance a lovely heart slowly pulse beats stronger smile come closer I hurt when I cant pull You under me

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Date: 4/15/2025 5:31:00 PM
There’s something dreamlike and aching in this-- like reaching for someone you can feel but never fully touch. That last line is devastating… desire tangled with absence, pulling the heart into poetry. Beautiful work, Bais.
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Date: 3/25/2025 8:39:00 PM
to the beat I enjoyed this piece/first comment
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