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I am in a hypnotic TRANCELIKE state, but not a dream. The pain went away and became a SURREAL discovery. In these HAZY times, my heart swelled with esteem. I was in a DREAMLIKE inspired by the natural recovery. I tumble faint pain, staring at the ETHEREAL paradise. A yellow dwarf in the SHADOWY flow by a focal spot. Responsibility outlines our reality until we verbalize. An overzealous ego caused the IMAGINARY threat. Hallucinations versus UNREAL degrade over time. Even though I'm stuck on my bed, afraid of the cold. A girl using a wet, fluffy towel wiped my tears slime. I'm so centered today that I can't let my eyes behold. Dispose of all else, and aid will arise as required. As I flee earth ties, my vitality and skill grow. It makes me feel refreshed in my mind. Spooky areas that reflect the spirits undergo. Now I'm feeling pretty optimistic and trusting. My life is back to being fun and lovely subdue. The natural day is peaceful and hardly reproving Simply, it's because I was in love with you. Third place contest winner Written: May 24, 2021 Writing Prompt - Dreamlike - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 6/3/2021 10:57:00 AM
Wonderfully articulated Lasaad taking us between the realm of challenges and rising up again in stirring imagery. Congratulations on your win! Blessings for continued recovery!
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Date: 6/2/2021 3:30:00 PM
Las, wonderful and congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Dreamlike - Challenge, and I like your image too, peace _ Constance
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Date: 6/2/2021 4:19:00 PM
Thank you so much, dearest Constance. I appreciate you reading, commenting, and for the placement too. Blessings and hugs
Date: 6/2/2021 12:16:00 PM
A Beautiful Poem. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/2/2021 4:20:00 PM
Thanks, Alex, appreciated it
Date: 5/25/2021 12:45:00 PM
A wonderful poem to the one you love Lasaad. You are creating some wonderful poems.
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Date: 5/25/2021 1:10:00 PM
Thank you for your lovely comment, Ken. Most appreciated
Date: 5/24/2021 10:30:00 PM
A very emotive poem. My hospital bed has been occupied far too much for my comfort. Glad you're out of it now.
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Date: 5/25/2021 1:11:00 PM
Hi Victor, It is most kind of you to stop by and comment so kindly. Blessings
Date: 5/24/2021 7:32:00 PM
Your imagery is sublime, and your flow and rhyming are very pleasing, Lasaad. I enjoyed this immensely. Best of wishes for a win. :=)
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Date: 5/25/2021 1:12:00 PM
It is most kind of you to stop by and comment so kindly Evelyn, thanks for your wishes, my best regards, and blessings
Date: 5/24/2021 4:46:00 PM
Hi Lasaad, You made good use of the chosen words and penned a well-written poem. I Enjoyed the positive tone and vibe of your write. Best wishes in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 5/24/2021 5:44:00 PM
I'm glad you like it, dear Alexis; it's always a bit difficult to insert the preselected words in the poem; I hope this one will get a placement. Thanks for your continued support Alexis
Date: 5/24/2021 1:49:00 PM
Interesting read, Lasaad, with many inspirational images. I enjoyed your poem. Best wishes in the contest.
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Date: 5/24/2021 2:47:00 PM
I'm overjoyed that you liked the scenes I've built here, Milton; your wonderful comments bring a lot of happiness to my spirit. It's so kind of you to stop by and leave such a kind message.

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