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Author's Notes: "Dreams Divine," is a Canzone I completed on January 1, 2017. This is my first poem of the new year, and I wrote it as a special tribute to a dear friend of mine. This is the third Canzone I've written that follows the original poetic tradition of this particular format, as a precursor to the sonnet, which was significantly influenced by both Francesco Petrarca (Petrarch) and Dante Alighieri. The structure of this Canzone consists of One Stanza rendered in 14 verses. I kept this write in "Open Meter" this time, vice the more traditional Iambic Pentameter or Hexameter schema. My purpose with this poem was to consider certain aspects of the ethereal nature of dreams and the innate subtlety they reflect deeply in one's own psyche, in effect, in the "soul's mirror" itself. Similar, in intent, to what I mentioned in an earlier Canzone ("God's Holy Whisper of Love") that I wrote and posted on July 15, 2016 -- it's nice to know that there are poets from centuries past to the present, who have touched on themes similar to mine here, and have continued to speak of the importance of love and passion in the human experience and the quintessential role they play in prayer and reflection toward bringing each of us closer to God. In effect, God's message to mankind in our mortal world is one of love. We should endeavor to listen for the message He sends to us in our dreams, and in each of our personal prayers to Him. (Gary Bateman - January 1, 2017) (Canzone)

Categories: dream, faith, god, heaven, love, metaphor, and symbolism.

Structural Notes Regarding This Canzone:

One Stanza

14 Verses

Meter: Open

Total Words: 137 (including the title)

Rhyme Scheme: aabbccddeeaaff

Dreams Divine Dreams are deepest images formed in one’s mind, Showing us events past, present, and future in kind. Subtle faces be they that reflect in the soul’s mirror, Whilst pleading in hints the reason why—not clearer. God gives us dreams of the divine to spark a fire, And sustains us in our imperfect trials to so inspire. God speaks to us in His spirit-dream code of passion, Whilst Angels on high sing paeans to His divine action. Dreams show us a mystic way to His love and light, On trails of cosmic dust bathed bold-bright at night! God wants us poets to set these dreams to rhyme, So we all can dream deeply of His true love in kind! Dreams harken enchantment beyond the everyday, As we mortals seek God’s holy spirit in every way! Gary Bateman, Copyright © All Rights Reserved, January 1, 2017 (Canzone) A special tribute to my dear friend Ardiana

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Date: 2/27/2017 10:35:00 AM
Dreams Divine is a beautiful poem. I enjoyed your poem. You said that you published a book on poetry, I would like to know, the title of the book if it is possible. Thank you.
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Gary Bateman
Date: 2/27/2017 11:22:00 AM
Hello Darlene, Thanks for your read of "Dreams Divine" and for your wonderful comment here. The book of poetry I published during April 2015 was released under the title of "Conversations with My Muse." And, it can be ordered/purchased online via Amazon or by Barnes & Noble or any other major book seller. (I recommend the paperback version. It's cheaper to buy and is same size as the hardback.) I'm planning another book of collected poetry in the future as well. Thanks!! Best Always, Gary
Date: 2/25/2017 3:42:00 PM
Lovely, Robert! Keep those dreams alive!
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Gary Bateman
Date: 2/27/2017 11:15:00 AM
No Problem at all Kim. I fully understand. I hope you're feeling better with your tooth. I will drop by to check out your poetry. (I've suspended posting any further poetry for a short-while since I'm currently enmeshed in the manuscript of my second book -- a book of prose writes -- but should be back actively engaged with poetry again in the future.) Best Always, Gary
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/26/2017 2:48:00 PM
Wow, so sorry, Gary! Please forgive me! I was on hydrocodone for my tooth!!! Still coherent but I was a little loopy :)
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Gary Bateman
Date: 2/25/2017 3:58:00 PM
Thanks Kim!! Glad you liked by Canzone here on "Dreams Divine." And, by the way, my name is "Gary" and not "Robert" -- unless you have me confused with someone else. Anyway, thanks for your read and great comment!! Cheers and Best, Gary
Date: 2/5/2017 4:55:00 PM
Truly inspiring piece, Gary :)
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Gary Bateman
Date: 2/5/2017 10:40:00 PM
Thanks Kina!! Happy New Year too -- by the way!! Glad you liked this Canzone. Dreams are so very important. Best Always, Gary
Date: 1/3/2017 9:29:00 PM
Golden words my very talented poetic friend. Spiritual , truthful, smooth flowing fine rhyming verses and a clear concise message to poets. Dreams you undoubtedly embrace..A7
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Gary Bateman
Date: 1/4/2017 4:06:00 PM
Hello Robert, Happy New Year Wishes to you and your family!! And thanks so much for your very kind thoughts and observations on my latest Canzone here. Yes, for sure, these dreams and others just like them are very important. Thanks too for the "7"!! (I'll drop by to check out your latest writes. Still working on my book of prose -- my big challenge to finish it this year for publication.) Again, my and Ingrid's best wishes to you and your family for a wonderful year in 2017!! Best Always, Gary
Date: 1/3/2017 2:42:00 AM
An inspiring spiritual poem that enriches the soul mein freund, Gary! A huge seven and Happy New Year for you and your family!
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Gary Bateman
Date: 1/3/2017 1:28:00 PM
Hallo Herr Professor (Demetrios)!! Ich bedanke mich sehr!! Alles Gute von Ingrid and ich fuer das Neues Jahr!! Likewise, our best wishes too, to you and your family. We hope 2017 will be a more promising year. (Keep Your Fingers Crossed!!) Cheers, Gary
Date: 1/2/2017 4:43:00 PM
I think you might well have penned more than just a few grains of truth here, Gary - Nicely composed! All the very best for your New Year - And my warmest regards! :) john
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Gary Bateman
Date: 1/2/2017 4:59:00 PM
Hello John, Always a pleasure to hear from you. And thanks too, for your gracious comments here. I did, in fact, like how this one turned out. The words and rhyme fell into place perfectly. Best Happy New Year Wishes to you and your family!! Gary
Date: 1/2/2017 4:23:00 PM
This is a great piece Gary...perfect for the season...have a happy and healthy new year.
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Gary Bateman
Date: 1/2/2017 4:26:00 PM
Hello Tim, Happy New Year to you too!! Glad you liked my Canzone here. I thought I'd start the year out with something uplifting. Continued best wishes . . . Gary
Date: 1/2/2017 12:50:00 AM
Hi there G !This is a very beautiful, and really outstanding dreams divine Canzone poem, that you've composed here , my dear friend Gary.I love it!Just awesome!A very beautifully written painted piece for sure, G. :))And I loved reading your amazing notes too.Excellent! Just wonderful!I truly enjoyed it! Golden pen!A 7 + + + ! A fav.Sending my love n' prayers to you and Ingrid, as always:))Please, take very good care of each other now and always, G.Wishing you and dear Ingrid a Very Safe, Warm, Blessed, and Prosperous Happy New Year!:))All the best to you both always G! Spill ink!:)Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:)D
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Gary Bateman
Date: 1/2/2017 9:53:00 AM
Hello Dear One "D" -- What can I say to all of your praiseworthy comments, except very many thanks, and that Ingrid and I wish you all the best for the New Year!! I look forward to reading you poems whenever I when I'm on Poetry Soup. (My second book, under development, takes so much of my time. When it's done, I be able to fully concentrate again on poetry pretty much full-time again!!) Thanks too for the TR/FAV!! Again, all the best from Ingrid and me for the New Year!! Spill Ink Always!! "G"
Date: 1/1/2017 10:10:00 PM
A 7 for this lovely, inspiring spiritual poem, Gary. Janice
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Gary Bateman
Date: 1/2/2017 9:56:00 AM
Hello Janice!! And thanks so much for the "7" and for your comment here. I'm glad you liked the Canzone I put together here. (I will be by to check out your poetry as well. Feel free, of course, to read any of my other poems as you may choose to do so!! Happy New Year!! Gary
Date: 1/1/2017 4:14:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Gary. Happy New Year:)
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Gary Bateman
Date: 1/1/2017 6:37:00 PM
Thanks very much Daniel!! I thought this poem with its jaunt into the ethereal world would be a grand way to help kick off the new year now upon us. I'm pleased you liked it!! Happy New Year -- too!! Gary
Date: 1/1/2017 2:17:00 PM
- A marvel poems, Gary - Without dreams .... life would be black / white ... without hope ... - Best wishes for many divine dreams for the new year :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Gary Bateman
Date: 1/2/2017 9:47:00 AM
I will take a look at it this evening Anne-Lise. (In always enjoy your writes -- as you already know!!) Cheers, Gary
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/2/2017 2:43:00 AM
- I will share my poem : - Au Revoir - Goodbye - with you, Gary -Hope you like it :)
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Gary Bateman
Date: 1/1/2017 6:35:00 PM
Hello Dear Anne-Lise, Yes -- I totally agree. Life without the possibilities of dreams and our individual imaginations would be a boring black-white existence for sure. Let's have as many "divine dreams" as we can for this fresh new year!! Cheers and All The Best!! Gary
Date: 1/1/2017 1:38:00 PM
this just melted into the soul of visions you pen sang out golden in this pal
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Gary Bateman
Date: 1/1/2017 1:59:00 PM
Thanks Liam Mate!! And best wishes to you and your family for the New Year. I certainly enjoyed putting this Canzone together. A great message indeed for all. Cheers and Best from Ingrid and me, Gary

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