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Dreams Disappear

Watching my dreams disappear, reality's hard to bear. And as hope starts to vanish, it's like I'm choking for air. Captivated by your smile; I'm a prisoner of love. And exposed to constant stress, I seek guidance from above. In a fit of jealousy, my anger betrayed my heart. And I regret that my love will be what drives us apart. I shared my inner feelings, but you used them against me. And now, unrequited love will never set my heart free. Reeling from rejection's sting; I felt wounded to my core. For, devastated, I was shunned by the one I adore.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/13/2018 2:51:00 PM
A heartfelt write. Well done, Emile.
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Date: 3/13/2018 3:07:00 PM
Thank you Line, I appreciate your continued support and friendship my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/4/2015 8:11:00 AM
A very very beautiful poem. Definitely a 7!
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Date: 4/4/2015 9:48:00 AM
Thanks Funom, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 4/1/2015 4:35:00 PM
This reads like it should be a song. Very nice write, Emile...
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Date: 4/1/2015 6:24:00 PM
Thanks Dan, I appreciate your visit. Emile.
Date: 4/1/2015 2:19:00 PM
I guess this is from personal experience. Well written. I've heard it happens to the best of us.
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Date: 4/1/2015 2:30:00 PM
Thanks once more, your support is greatly appreciated. Emile.
Date: 4/1/2015 11:01:00 AM
This is beautiful in its very own sadness, Emile. It is not only the pain of losing out on somebody you love, but also the fact that you feel the blame for it. #7 All the best for this month of April. // paul
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Date: 4/1/2015 11:16:00 AM
Thanks Paul, I appreciate your visit. Emile.
Date: 4/1/2015 10:41:00 AM
Awesome. This poem speaks to me. I want to reach out and comfort that vulnerable heart.
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Date: 4/1/2015 11:18:00 AM
Thanks so much Nandita, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 4/1/2015 10:20:00 AM
This is sad Emile, I hope it is not a current experience.
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Date: 4/1/2015 11:19:00 AM
Thanks Richard, it's all just fiction, a poem and no more. Emile.
Date: 4/1/2015 9:18:00 AM
You hold a very beautiful pen, Emile.
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Date: 4/1/2015 11:25:00 AM
Thanks so much Agatha, I appreciate it. Emile.

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