Dreams Come True

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she had a dream
of seaside escapades
and seabreeze in her hair
this little girl of three
landlocked
utterly determined
to make her dream come true
with a fistful of crayons
she brought to life her pony





Published in my 24-page photo/anthology ~A CHILD'S WORLD~ 2020

AP: 3rd place 2021, Honorable Mention 2020

Submitted on March 2, 2022 for contest A BRIAN STRAND FREED VERSE sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 1ST

Posted on January 17, 2020

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/18/2020 3:49:00 AM

I had to fav this one, I always wanted a pony as a kid, after a certain age, I would still say that's what I wanted but no one's ever given me one. I'll probably still be asking for it at age 99; of course, I'll be too old to ride without falling off.

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/18/2020 12:01:00 PM

Even at age 99 you could hug and pet your horse, ML. Thank you for the wonderful compliment of FAV'ing this poem. Glad it resonated with you. I hope your dream comes true.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/17/2020 11:55:00 PM

It is amazing how easily you do this, my friend. I see it happening!

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/18/2020 12:11:00 AM

Thank you so much, Caren. Most appreciated.

Charles Messina

Date: 1/17/2020 10:07:00 PM

..and they both galloped away into the sunset :) beautiful poem, Line :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/18/2020 12:11:00 AM

Thanks for your most delightful visit and comment, Charles.