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Dreams Are Just For Dreaming

I slip on through the smoke screens
hitting just a little too close
night vision is a bonus
to help me see right through
no different from what I discovered
some things will never change
and I leave you like I found you
with nothing rearranged

I once passed you on the road
your thumb out, hitchin a ride
I was carrying a heavy load
construction made a difficult drive
no places on the shoulder
no pull off posted by sign
I stop in the middle of the street
getting ticketed for my time

dreams are just for dreaming
made up of hazy fantasies
real life is for real living
not framing in a picture frame
you take what He hands down
place it with all the rest
you do with it what you can
hoping that you safely land

so I stand on solid ground
as the world spins round and round
it is my competitive nature
that won't let me back down
I once took my best shot
got a ribbon for second place
but I was in the running
I accept my trophy with grace

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/18/2010 1:41:00 PM
the grace behind the glory. this poem took first place with me. all the words in the right place, the rhymes, the ideals. when i saw your name i thought that there might be something good. and there was. away to my faves it goes. an also your initals to my fav poet list. John Henry Loving III
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Date: 6/18/2010 1:14:00 PM
I really love the first stanza, I can totally relate to those ideas. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 6/18/2010 12:06:00 PM
Hi JB! I think best when all our wonderful dreams become a reality. After all, our thought s make our world especially, unconscious ones. Just a little PSYCH 101, ha ha. But anyways, a terrific poem especially about taking your best shot! Love, Susan
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