Dreams and Eternity

My wife had a dream--
we were on a train and 
as it pulled into the station,
she grabbed the bags but 
I had vanished....
She looked and looked, 
went up and down 
the long platform anxiously 
as waves of strangers moved
past her--her fears rising, 
her throat drying as she felt lost,
like a child cast off alone 
in the world...abandoned.

She went to where 
the proud station master stood, 
and then saw me behind him, 
looking very tired, worn-out, 
perhaps even a little sad ....

I never asked what she thought 
the dream might mean, if anything.
But I wondered if it meant that 
my life was closing out, that 
our long train ride of forty-odd years 
was finally pulling into the terminal. 

Was it 'just a dream' or a dream rare, 
a dream of prophecy, a dream calling,  
a dream of eternity... 
but isn't every dream eternal, 
Existing like a little life, real 
and of time and substance?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 12/11/2020 1:25:00 PM
Cool musings, Nolo ~
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Date: 5/27/2020 2:29:00 PM
- Dreams can be so much and it's not always easy to understand them - Dreams are the best therapy for us humans ... and dreams can be fulfilled - Congratulations on your winning poem, L.J. :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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L. J. Carber
Date: 5/28/2020 9:25:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise
Date: 5/27/2020 1:42:00 PM
That's such a chilling thought actually. Your words created an aura of fear and suspense. Congratulations on your win :)
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L. J. Carber
Date: 5/28/2020 9:25:00 PM
Thank you, Aditi!
Date: 1/27/2020 2:53:00 PM
Gorgeous write my friend! Congrats on your win!;)
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Date: 1/7/2019 10:53:00 AM
Hi L.J. dropping by with my congratulations on your well-deserved win in the contest with this wonderful write. have a wonderful Monday....Mike.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 1/8/2019 3:06:00 PM
Thank you Mike, much appreciated!
Date: 1/6/2019 1:37:00 PM
So moving and thought-provoking on both a micro and a macro level, L.J. Your poem truly addresses the objective of the contest. Really well done! Congrats, Gershon
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L. J. Carber
Date: 1/7/2019 9:53:00 AM
Thanks Gershon, and may I wish you and yours a very good 2019!
Date: 1/6/2019 1:23:00 PM
- A great win, congratulations, L.J. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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L. J. Carber
Date: 1/7/2019 9:53:00 AM
Thanks Sunshine! I appreciate it.
Date: 1/6/2019 11:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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L. J. Carber
Date: 1/7/2019 9:52:00 AM
Thank you Silent One- I feel honored!
Date: 11/4/2018 11:45:00 PM
hi It seem to be a good dream. As after making struggle and efforts she ultimately find you. So it is a sign of something good coming to her after making some struggle.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 11/5/2018 9:00:00 AM
Thank you Muhammad
Date: 10/7/2018 12:28:00 PM
As they say, dreams are based on what is on the individual's mind at the time. Your musings could well be justified... Loved that last line too... Best wishes, Gershon
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L. J. Carber
Date: 10/9/2018 9:56:00 AM
Thanks, my friend-- I must admit, I dig that line too!
Date: 9/24/2018 8:58:00 AM
This is very thought-provoking, L.J. Sometimes I wake up after a strange or unsettling dream thinking "What was THAT about?" Janice
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L. J. Carber
Date: 9/25/2018 9:07:00 AM
Thanks, Janice-- dreams really are like other 'lives' we live, aren't they?
Date: 9/19/2018 5:42:00 PM
I like your dreamy poem. I dare not ever try to interpret mine. Very strange ones I have!!!
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Date: 9/19/2018 5:42:00 PM
but I love them for they are in technicolor
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L. J. Carber
Date: 9/19/2018 8:26:00 PM
Thanks Andrea-- I think my dreams are always in color, though perhaps not technicolor! (which might indicate you have a vivid imagination, or are an artist)
Date: 9/19/2018 5:47:00 AM
Len, as always your poems, beautifully written, grab my imagination and draw me into your world. Perhaps dreams, attempting to locate ourselves in the mystery of sleep, reflect our fears, but do not predict the future from some fountain of knowledge and wisdom.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 9/19/2018 8:24:00 AM
Thank you my friend. No one in this world can say what dreams are--my guess is they're multifaceted: some are pure nonsense, a sort of play; some reflect conflicts of the unconscious;and perhaps, just perhaps a few are from beyond our limited world. The one thing certain is that whilst we dream, they seem as real as this world of daylight and gravity.
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