Dreams

Most beautiful pink delicate cherry blossom bouquet of sweet dreams then slight wind blows and blossom flutters like pink confetti. 11/04/2017. Contest one Tanka old or new.

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Elizabeth Kinch

Date: 4/11/2017 2:52:00 PM

Beautiful imagery Roy, a stunning cherry blossom dream and a seven. Easter blessings to you.

Roy Pett
Date: 4/11/2017 3:32:00 PM

Thank you so much for your very kind comment Elizabeth, wishing you a happy Easter, Roy. :))

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 4/11/2017 11:33:00 AM

Lovely image you have painted here :) 7 xomo!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/11/2017 12:05:00 PM

Thank you for lumping me in with the "accomplished"! ;) xomo!

Roy Pett
Date: 4/11/2017 12:00:00 PM

Thank you so much for your very kind comment Maureen, first time I've attempted this form, so pleased to receive comments of praise from accomplished poets, thanks again Roy. :))

Phil Capitano

Date: 4/11/2017 7:33:00 AM

Beautiful Roy, I can see them flutter in my mind's eye.

Roy Pett
Date: 4/11/2017 7:41:00 AM

Thank you very much for your very kind comment Phil, so pleased you liked this, Roy. :))