Dreams

Most beautiful pink

delicate cherry blossom 

bouquet of sweet dreams

then slight wind blows and blossom 

flutters like pink confetti.

11/04/2017.
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April 11, 2017 at 2:52 PM
Beautiful imagery Roy, a stunning cherry blossom dream and a seven. Easter blessings to you.
Pett Avatar
April 11, 2017 at 3:32 PM
Thank you so much for your very kind comment Elizabeth, wishing you a happy Easter, Roy. :))
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April 11, 2017 at 11:33 AM
Lovely image you have painted here :) 7 xomo!
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April 11, 2017 at 12:05 PM
Thank you for lumping me in with the "accomplished"! ;) xomo!
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April 11, 2017 at 12:00 PM
Thank you so much for your very kind comment Maureen, first time I've attempted this form, so pleased to receive comments of praise from accomplished poets, thanks again Roy. :))
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April 11, 2017 at 7:33 AM
Beautiful Roy, I can see them flutter in my mind's eye.
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April 11, 2017 at 7:41 AM
Thank you very much for your very kind comment Phil, so pleased you liked this, Roy. :))
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