Dreams

Dreams--- A source of inspiration for the tired soul. We do when we seek a solution bold. Always creative and passionately told. Feels like deja vu when realised whole. Oh brain, you are a complex mixture. Of rationality and failed ideology. You guide me silently in sleep, Till I wake with an eureka glee. Holding my hand blissfully free. Teaching me the meaning that I lack Which makes me live a life, anew. I wish I relive the moment again, with you. Oh, the great old knowledge tree, I tell these mysteries with you, Or until I remain free. Udit---

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Teddy Kimathi

Date: 6/10/2016 4:48:00 PM

I love the natural flow of your piece - it's as though the words are all in their right places... Congrats Udit, for having your awesome work featured in the Poetrysoup homepage!!! ;-)

Moon Flower

Date: 5/29/2016 1:34:00 AM

That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Udit. :)

Skat A

Date: 5/21/2016 8:50:00 AM

UDIT, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/21/2016 7:35:00 AM

Udit,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@"