Dreams

Dreams---

A source of inspiration for the tired soul.
We do when we seek a solution bold.
Always creative and passionately told.
Feels like deja vu when realised whole.

Oh brain, you are a complex mixture.
Of rationality and failed ideology.
You guide me silently in sleep,
Till I wake with an eureka glee.
Holding my hand blissfully free.
Teaching me the meaning that I lack
Which makes me live a life, anew.

I wish I relive the moment again, with you.
Oh, the great old knowledge tree,
I tell these mysteries with you,
Or until I remain free.

Udit---
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Kimathi Avatar
June 10, 2016 at 4:48 PM
I love the natural flow of your piece - it's as though the words are all in their right places... Congrats Udit, for having your awesome work featured in the Poetrysoup homepage!!! ;-)
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May 29, 2016 at 1:34 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Udit. :)
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May 21, 2016 at 8:50 AM
UDIT, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"
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May 21, 2016 at 7:35 AM
Udit,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@"
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