Anbes Rawal Poet Abecedarian

Dreams

when you dream like a child
and you dream as a girl
when moments do arrive 
you've been dreaming all along
 
your friends area all around you
you think they'll help you when you're down
but friendships just betrayal
cause you've been dreaming all along

saying days are just new
getting old but you never knew 
and when moment comes for death
you feel
you've been dreaming all along
 
when you love a girl so much 
and she turns and smiles one day
you say
i wish 
i hadn't been dreaming all along

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Jaafar Sadig El Waad November 11, 2014 at 7:14 AM tangible expression and comprehension of what is happening today with feelings like love, friendship....enjoyed greatly!

Anne-Lise Andresen November 2, 2014 at 6:01 AM - Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Anbes- I choose your first well written poem - I like it a lot !! - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)