Dreams

I often lie back and have a dream Of a wonderful man I’ve never seen Tall and handsome with greying hair He’s in my thoughts does he know I’m there We could share so much together In my dreams it could last forever But then I wake and reality hits Sometimes dreams just are the pits! Jan Allison 17th June 2014

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Emmanuel Brian Oule

Date: 7/20/2014 2:17:00 PM

Owesome Poem, i wish you could get to Facebook profile, you could see my future look with grey hair, i could be that man, hehehe Any way thank you for reading "33 ann Beautiful" i had to withdraw it earlier for review but i have re-posted the same poem Love Bryan JAN, XOXO

Jan Allison
Date: 7/20/2014 2:19:00 PM

LOL Bryan thanks for dropping by to comment on my work i do appreciate it. Sadly I don't do 2facedbook - I can see the attraction for some, but its not for me! Hugs jan xx

Joe Flach

Date: 6/18/2014 5:04:00 PM

Jan, I am sure there is a man out there dreaming about you, too. It is when the dreams collide in reality that the sparks begin to fly and you go from the pits to the pinnacle. Good luck with that tall and handsome wonder. Joe

Jan Allison
Date: 6/18/2014 5:10:00 PM

Would be wonderful Joe - not sure if my hubby would be happy if I fulfilled my dream but there is no harm in dreaming is there LOL. Hugs as ever Jan xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/18/2014 1:47:00 PM

- Continue with your pleasant dreams .... one day ..... you will understand who it is :)) - Lovely dream poem,Jan. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 6/18/2014 2:47:00 PM

That Anne Lise is a lovely thought I will hold that in my head now:-) Hugs as ever jan xxxx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/18/2014 1:01:00 PM

ohh, this is enjoyable, jan.. i love how you tweaked the last line.. lovely thoughts and images; i'll go for the grey hair when i get older,, lol.. huggs!

Jan Allison
Date: 6/18/2014 1:20:00 PM

Thanks for the lovely comment Nette - greying men - mmmm - I like them now always have done always will at least I can dream! Hugs as ever Jan xxxx

Vera Duggan

Date: 6/17/2014 9:17:00 PM

Lovely Jan, I myself like Dark black hair on a man but unfortunately as they get older they start to grey, Peter had black hair when I met him but he was even going grey then at nineteen, now he is white and head shaved, but keep dreaming my dear but be happy with who you have got Take care my friend.........Vera..............

Jan Allison
Date: 6/18/2014 1:16:00 AM

Thanks for the lovely comment Vera I just think men get more attractive as they get old and the greying hair does it for me LOl. hugs Jan xxxx

Jack Clark

Date: 6/17/2014 5:51:00 PM

Fantasies and dreams are intriguing, as this poem illustrates … but … reality is the anchor that keeps us sane and trusting, which the closing lines suggest. Keeping the two separate and distinct must always be the goal - however, letting them “bump” each other every once in a while – keeps all the players “honest” and alert! Loved this write, Jan! Jack C

Jan Allison
Date: 6/17/2014 5:59:00 PM

Thanks for the lovely comment Jack. Hugs as ever Jan xxx

Tim Smith

Date: 6/17/2014 3:57:00 PM

That's when you back to sleep...lol Maybe one day your husband will dye his hair gray for you :) ....hugs Tim

Jan Allison
Date: 6/17/2014 4:02:00 PM

Lol he hasn't got much hair left - stress of being married to me i guess. I just adore me who are greying - always have always will lol Hugs as ever Jan xxx