Dreams

As I slowly fade in my hovel, TV speakers playing. I dream of a cave a lone figure? A whisper, "Zareba." Zareba? In my head. I ponder. A monolith appears, so transparent it is. Ohh! The admiral bounty of this scene, in my head? I reminisce of happy times. The traffic noise is distracting. Wait! Is this really all but a dream? Ohh! How I wish this dream. SO true?

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Skat A

Date: 3/4/2014 4:19:00 PM

Lovely win, loving this one again.... SKAT

Sandip Goswami

Date: 3/4/2014 2:37:00 AM

Nice dream of nice person . Best wishes from India .

Joyce Johnson

Date: 2/27/2014 11:24:00 AM

Too bad about Zareba but good job otherwise. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/27/2014 6:33:00 AM

Congratulations on the fine win. Enjoyed the write on the Dreams, ambrose

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 2/27/2014 3:50:00 AM

wrong use of zareba it is a thorny enclosure cost you points Ambrose congrats on honourable mention ty for entering hugs

Skat A

Date: 2/22/2014 7:51:00 PM

Ambrose, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your way of writing. But, for the mean time, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/21/2014 3:23:00 PM

a wonderful free verse write, Ambrose, haha, and I'm not only saying that, because I dream of camaflodging with zebras.... a fun first post. , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join the soup March 2010. You will find many friendly poets, who ready to take you under the their wings, and support and offer any kind of feedback. I will be around to help you grow with the community, if you like. I look forward to meeting and reading any poems or smiles you offer. :) :) :) We are one big happy family. (Drama & Love) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/21/2014 1:00:00 PM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Ambrose - I choose your first lovely written poem - hope you will write many poem in the future- Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)