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Confused arising Seeking, searching, scrutinizing. . . Succeeding. Conniving, cutlasses, smirking swords; Silently mocking, laughing at my doom. Glaring, glowering, with a gleam in their eye. Eerie eye patches, sneering smiles; Sinisterly scheming, anticipating gloom. Creeping, crawling, cringing. . . Complete. Concrete awakening.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/16/2013 4:39:00 PM
This is a very lovely poem, Rachel. Stopping by to wish you a nice warm welcome to the Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community one of the best here on the net. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please feel free and look me up by clicking on my name anytime you see it.. Luv~*~SKAT
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Date: 4/15/2013 8:36:00 AM
Damn. This was very intense. Great lines!
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