Dreams

This might not be a poem. I do not know what it is that is that a poem makes,
but it will have love, this one - this one that I'm making. And love...
Two swans with their long necks intertwined and a ring
I'd like to put on your finger sum' day. Hm, and also that song which reminds me
That you are not here and that makes me ask "Maybe I love you."

Or maybe it's "Baby, I love you." Let us begin with a question,
What if dreams are the glimpses of the other lives that we are living
In those meta-universes and elseworlds whose existence we've only pondered?

What does it matter? what if I say that I've dreamt of us together.
And to be quite blunt, I was sure I was pleased, and you seemed quite content.
I held your hand, or rather we've held each other. 

"Fingers lodged like branches in the river" and it was no burden. The burden is in waking up.

I wake up and that song plays on the radio, and you are not with me.
But "Baby, I love you." I wonder if you've dreamt of us two... 

too...

Wouldn't it be a bother if dreams were more than dreams and What we've seen
would be just as real as cake. I can be the eggs and you be the flower.

We're all we need to be sleeping awake. 

Then I remember that song. 
It tells me you're not here.
It plays on and on as I rise from my bed,
What does it mean to wake up alone,
to face the fear that you've been dreaming all on your own?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 3/23/2016 9:41:00 PM
nice to see this one again, Cris. LINDA
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Date: 1/13/2013 11:25:00 AM
intresting
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Date: 1/9/2013 9:06:00 PM
Cris Navarro, this is an awesome free verse poem... however i have a question... alone or not... aren't our dreams our own... love the poem...pd
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Cris Navarro
Date: 1/9/2013 11:34:00 PM
Hello PD, thanks for reading my poem. I was just speaking of a double loneliness... to wake up alone, and to realize you might be the only one dreaming of doing anything about it.
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