Dreams

Silent whispers in the wind
Through the leaves to blow again
Softly shining in the sky
The moon an everlasting watchful eye


Short Poem Contest
By Shani Fassbender
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
May 16, 2011 at 11:33 AM
Congratulations on your win in Judy's contest Shani. Love,Carol
Buckeridge Avatar
May 13, 2011 at 8:34 AM
Lovely poem, great win x
Devonshire Avatar
May 12, 2011 at 10:24 AM
Another great win for you today, Shani! Love the thought of seeing the moon as "an everlasting watchful eye." Congratulations on your win, Love, Carolyn
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May 12, 2011 at 7:50 AM
Lovely poem.Congrats Shani on your win....
Mehta Avatar
May 12, 2011 at 7:27 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of judy, Shani
Dietrich Avatar
May 11, 2011 at 8:21 PM
A lovely moon poem. Congratulations on your win, Shani.
Konos Avatar
May 11, 2011 at 7:06 PM
Thank you for being in my contest
Sweetheart Avatar
May 11, 2011 at 4:14 PM
Congrats Shani on your HM in Short Poem contest luv.. fantastic write ..awesome honor ..enjoy my friend..luv..
Ronthorpe Avatar
May 11, 2011 at 3:02 PM
Nice imagery. Very well done.
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