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Silent whispers in the wind Through the leaves to blow again Softly shining in the sky The moon an everlasting watchful eye Short Poem Contest By Shani Fassbender

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Date: 5/16/2011 11:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Judy's contest Shani. Love,Carol
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Date: 5/13/2011 8:34:00 AM
Lovely poem, great win x
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Date: 5/12/2011 10:24:00 AM
Another great win for you today, Shani! Love the thought of seeing the moon as "an everlasting watchful eye." Congratulations on your win, Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/12/2011 7:50:00 AM
Lovely poem.Congrats Shani on your win....
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Date: 5/12/2011 7:27:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of judy, Shani
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Date: 5/11/2011 8:21:00 PM
A lovely moon poem. Congratulations on your win, Shani.
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Date: 5/11/2011 7:06:00 PM
Thank you for being in my contest
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Date: 5/11/2011 4:14:00 PM
Congrats Shani on your HM in Short Poem contest luv.. fantastic write ..awesome honor ..enjoy my friend..luv..
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Date: 5/11/2011 3:02:00 PM
Nice imagery. Very well done.
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