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Dreams

when dreams die, death isn't far
then hope leaves floating in a jar
search drawers cluttered closets too
neither are found 

dreams scattered to the winds
but hope remained
someday, someday, in the future
was the constant refrain

health gone lost by the way
arthritis impedes talents waylaid
days there are hopes that health will come
then a sadness engulfs like a drum

somewhere enthusiasm disappeared 
did someone else pick it up
or is it like the dust off tires by the roadside
has depression now settled in    
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kerr Avatar
February 21, 2026 at 10:53 PM
A sincere, heartfelth, authentic poem that ialso draws attention to the possibility of hope. Genuine sympathy on my behalf to all who are in this situation, Sara. Howard
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February 22, 2026 at 4:30 AM
As they say, Howard, old age is not for sissies. Some days are better than others, but those better days get fewer. I appreciate your support by dropping by and taking time to comment. Sara K
Scott Avatar
January 3, 2024 at 6:15 AM
Dearest Sara, I hear your words here x but I want to just say that your poetry belies and transcends all the aches and pains of the material. It has insight and soul and wisdom, it has beauty and presence, dear Sara. It also has hope in abundance and you reflect on the Godly secrets of this world with a gentle passion. Sending love from across the pond and thank YOU for being here and continuing to inspire us even through your pain and heartache. You are remarkable x
Kendrick Avatar
January 3, 2024 at 9:25 AM
Why, thank you, Sam. I appreciate the love from across the pond. Your visit is uplifting. Sara K
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December 6, 2023 at 7:49 PM
God bless you in your time of need, hope is a four letter word like love, safe, give, free, don’t ever give up. You are a child of God. Kelli
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December 7, 2023 at 2:56 AM
Why, thank you, Kelli. I need all the blessings I can get. Yes, I am a child of God and He loves me despite myself. Sara K
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December 4, 2023 at 11:35 PM
Sigh, I've been through this perpetual state of extremely bad health, depression and many other things. I can relate with these words to the core.. Especially, how you've said about dreams & hopes fading away. There's a saying that a person can survive few days without food and water and some moments without oxygen, but without hope, it only takes a millisecond to pull their souls out.. I'm sending you so much love, light & healing vibes, dear Sara, you're a beautiful soul!!
Kendrick Avatar
December 5, 2023 at 5:21 AM
Thank you, Hiya. Yes, sometimes hope seems to fade, but thank God, I still have hope even in times of problems. Sara K
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December 3, 2023 at 11:55 AM
hi Sara, stand by their side and hold God's banner with them, pray with all your might so that your prayers are heard, so sad when youth dies, but hope is still there. God Bless. My prayers are with you. hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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December 3, 2023 at 4:45 PM
Why, thank you, Jennifer. I appreciate the visit and for the blessings and prayers. Sara K
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December 3, 2023 at 6:31 AM
When dreams die, we still have time to dream again my friend.. health is always a worry, but you know I know so many healthy people who died young.. I felt the angst in your words..
Kendrick Avatar
December 3, 2023 at 8:14 AM
SO, it is sad when a person dies too young when they haven't been able to accomplish what God had for them to do. Thanks for the nice visit. Sara K
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December 2, 2023 at 3:08 PM
Sad but true. Dreams fade with age-- with all the ill effects aging brings. Potent write, Sara.
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December 3, 2023 at 3:37 AM
Vijay, Thank you for the kind review. I appreciate you doing so. Sara K
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December 2, 2023 at 3:00 PM
I can relate to this. B12 vitamins can work miracles. as for this piece it speaks in a poetic way. In the art we see that we are not alone.
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December 3, 2023 at 3:32 AM
TS, I put a dropper full of B12 under my tongue occasionally, but if I use it every day I will start to gain weight which is a negative in my situation. LOL..I am already about 40 lbs. to heavy. Thanks for the kind review of my work. Sara K
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December 2, 2023 at 1:07 PM
- "when dreams die, death isn't far" ... so true, Sara - When health is lost, everything becomes difficult ... a sad poem - hugs
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December 2, 2023 at 2:29 PM
Anne-Lise, thank you for your visit and for your kind review of my work. Sara K
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