Dreams

DREAMS I see new fantasies When asleep, flowing fast from reality Thoughts unfreeze The unreal scene With comfort in neutrality I preen Dear John Plurality Gone I see new fantasies With comfort in neutrality Gone

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/22/2023 4:32:00 PM

I loved the surreal nature of your poem, Howard. It's funny how dreams come and go...some we remember and some we don't. I liked the flow of your poem as well. Hope you had a pleasant weekend, Sara

Di11y Da11y

Date: 10/21/2023 11:35:00 PM

This is fascinating! It has dream sequence vibes where you are here then there - love it!

Karen Jones

Date: 10/21/2023 12:27:00 PM

Interesting write. Dreams are often revealing. Curious though we don't remember them all. I think even so we are influenced by them. Great thought provoking write.