Patri Venkata Ramana Poet Free verse

Dreams

I
                                               fail to
                                        write poems of
                                 dreams about my dearest
                          as my deep longing thoughts of her
                   whirl like persistent waves, and the strings of
                                her memories never allow
                                               me to
                                               sleep.



Ring My Bell Poetry Contest
Sponsor: John Anderson
Syllable Count: 1, 2, 4, 6, 8, 10, 8, 2, 1,
Date: 07-07-2021.

Won : 4th  place

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Anne-Lise Andresen July 9, 2021 at 12:48 PM - But you have the memories ... lovely poem, Patri :) - Congratulations on your win :) - // Anne-Lise :) Patri Venkata Ramana July 12, 2021 at 11:22 PM Thanks a lot for your compliments.

Jan Allison July 9, 2021 at 11:05 AM beautiful in its sadness, many congrats on your win Patri:-) hugs Jan xx Patri Venkata Ramana July 12, 2021 at 11:21 PM Thanks a lot for the compliments.

Eve Roper July 8, 2021 at 4:50 PM Well done and sad verse, Patri, congratulations on your win. Eve Patri Venkata Ramana July 12, 2021 at 11:21 PM Thank you so much for the compliments.

Beata Agustin July 8, 2021 at 1:39 AM Wow! Congrats! God bless you. Patri Venkata Ramana July 12, 2021 at 11:20 PM Thanks a lot for the compliments.

Christuraj Alex July 7, 2021 at 9:00 PM Beautifully Written. Congratulations! Patri Venkata Ramana July 12, 2021 at 11:20 PM Thank you so much for the compliments.