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Dreams

I fail to write poems of dreams about my dearest as my deep longing thoughts of her whirl like persistent waves, and the strings of her memories never allow me to sleep. Ring My Bell Poetry Contest Sponsor: John Anderson Syllable Count: 1, 2, 4, 6, 8, 10, 8, 2, 1, Date: 07-07-2021. Won : 4th place

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Date: 7/9/2021 12:48:00 PM
- But you have the memories ... lovely poem, Patri :) - Congratulations on your win :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 7/12/2021 11:22:00 PM
Thanks a lot for your compliments.
Date: 7/9/2021 11:05:00 AM
beautiful in its sadness, many congrats on your win Patri:-) hugs Jan xx
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 7/12/2021 11:21:00 PM
Thanks a lot for the compliments.
Date: 7/8/2021 4:50:00 PM
Well done and sad verse, Patri, congratulations on your win. Eve
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 7/12/2021 11:21:00 PM
Thank you so much for the compliments.
Date: 7/8/2021 1:39:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! God bless you.
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 7/12/2021 11:20:00 PM
Thanks a lot for the compliments.
Date: 7/7/2021 9:00:00 PM
Beautifully Written. Congratulations!
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 7/12/2021 11:20:00 PM
Thank you so much for the compliments.

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