Gary Smith Poet Tail-rhyme

Dreams

When she visits in my dreams
She has never left it seems,
Love never wanes.

Oft in the morn I weep
For yet another dream I'll keep,
Love still remains.

Let me sleep and never wake
In my dreams there's no heartache,
Love replaces pain.









Entry for
Triple Stanza Couplet Tail-Rhyme Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Charles Messina
1/6/2020.Placed =2nd.

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Reggae Magnet July 18, 2020 at 5:42 PM Nice and sharp, sorry reality beckons in a twitch of the eye, enjoyable,. Gary Smith July 18, 2020 at 6:07 PM Thank you Reggae. :)

Aditi Mishra July 7, 2020 at 4:27 AM Heartfelt write Gary. This is dreamy and touching at the same time. Congratulations on your win :) Gary Smith July 7, 2020 at 6:02 AM Thank you Aditi. :)

Imran Islam July 6, 2020 at 12:29 PM Beautiful write. Poets drew their dreams in the words of the mind. LP Gary Smith July 6, 2020 at 12:33 PM Thank you L.P. :)

Charles Messina July 3, 2020 at 5:03 AM Great write, Gary. Congratulations on your win n my contest. Hope all is well.. Charlie Gary Smith July 3, 2020 at 5:11 AM Thank you Charlie. :)

Sara Kendrick June 7, 2020 at 9:26 AM Reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. Sara Gary Smith June 7, 2020 at 9:54 AM Thank you Sara. :)

Gershon Wolf June 1, 2020 at 6:26 PM Superb contest entry, Gary. Strikes me just right. Here's to a win! :) gw Gary Smith June 2, 2020 at 4:36 AM Thank you Gershon. :)