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Dreams

When she visits in my dreams She has never left it seems, Love never wanes. Oft in the morn I weep For yet another dream I'll keep, Love still remains. Let me sleep and never wake In my dreams there's no heartache, Love replaces pain. Entry for Triple Stanza Couplet Tail-Rhyme Poetry Contest Sponsored by Charles Messina 1/6/2020.Placed =2nd.

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Date: 7/18/2020 5:42:00 PM
Nice and sharp, sorry reality beckons in a twitch of the eye, enjoyable,.
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Gary Smith
Date: 7/18/2020 6:07:00 PM
Thank you Reggae. :)
Date: 7/7/2020 4:27:00 AM
Heartfelt write Gary. This is dreamy and touching at the same time. Congratulations on your win :)
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Gary Smith
Date: 7/7/2020 6:02:00 AM
Thank you Aditi. :)
Date: 7/6/2020 12:29:00 PM
Beautiful write. Poets drew their dreams in the words of the mind. LP
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Gary Smith
Date: 7/6/2020 12:33:00 PM
Thank you L.P. :)
Date: 7/3/2020 5:03:00 AM
Great write, Gary. Congratulations on your win n my contest. Hope all is well.. Charlie
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Gary Smith
Date: 7/3/2020 5:11:00 AM
Thank you Charlie. :)
Date: 6/7/2020 9:26:00 AM
Reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. Sara
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Gary Smith
Date: 6/7/2020 9:54:00 AM
Thank you Sara. :)
Date: 6/1/2020 6:26:00 PM
Superb contest entry, Gary. Strikes me just right. Here's to a win! :) gw
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Gary Smith
Date: 6/2/2020 4:36:00 AM
Thank you Gershon. :)

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