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Dreams

"Because dreams are not to be shattered!"  (by Poet)    


                       If my life is like a river, not all pebbles are shiny, 

                      If my life is like a flower, not all petals are smooth. 

                               There are pebbles, there are petals, 

                                     Covered with dreams, 

                                 So soft, almost like an angel

                                         Touching them, 

                                           Caring them.

                                Let them be where they are -

                                            Unharmed, 

                          Because dreams are not to be shattered!

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Harry Horsman Date: 8/1/2021 11:34:00 PM Visiting your first post, Love the classical feel of your poetry, Malabika. Login to Reply Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 8/2/2021 6:06:00 PM Thank you, Harry, for your visit and inspiring comment. This poem came from the depth of my heart - a spontaneous expression of the dreams.

Line Gauthier Date: 12/11/2020 7:00:00 PM beautiful ~ belated welcome to PoetrySoup. Great first post! Login to Reply Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 8/2/2021 6:04:00 PM Thank you, Line. I am honoured.

Paul Callus Date: 10/24/2020 4:27:00 AM I love this delightful poem with which you launched yourself on PoetrySoup, Malabika. Hope you are enjoying your stay here....welcome! ~ Regards // paul Login to Reply Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 10/24/2020 5:55:00 PM Thank you so much, Paul. Yes, I am enjoying my stay at PoetrySoup and consider myself fortunate to be in the company of many talented poets. I am learning, and I am growing. Really appreciate your reading my poem, and leaving an inspiring comment. Always best wishes, Mala

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/27/2020 2:23:00 PM - Dreams can be so much and it's not always easy to understand them - Dreams are the best therapy for us humans ... and dreams can be fulfilled - Congratulations on your winning poem, Malabika :) - // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 5/28/2020 6:45:00 AM Thank you so much, Dear Poet. Really appreciate your beautiful, thoughtful comment. Will look forward to reading your poems.

Aditi Mishra Date: 5/27/2020 1:52:00 PM Dreams are indeed to be nurtured and lived for. Beautiful imagery. Congratulations on your win Mala :) Login to Reply Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 5/28/2020 6:43:00 AM Thanks, Aditi. Appreciate your thoughtful and inspiring comment. Love reading your poems. Best wishes.

Silent One Date: 5/27/2020 7:03:00 AM Profound words... philosophical take on the contest.. Login to Reply Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 5/27/2020 7:21:00 AM Thank you so much for appreciating my poem. It's a real honour to be placed third on your contest. Best wishes. Silent One Date: 5/27/2020 7:03:00 AM Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

JCB Brul Date: 5/8/2020 7:05:00 AM "Because dreams are not to be shattered!" The beauty of this poem is timeless. I love the way you have woven each word..each line that captures a sublime feeling once you started reading. Thank you for posting and WELCOME TO SOUP dear poet. Login to Reply Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 5/8/2020 7:23:00 PM Delighted to share my poem with you and other readers at PoetrySoup. This is my first posting, and I am already enjoying the company of great poets like you. Thank you for welcoming me.