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Dreamlike

My fickle-minded, "dreamlike" self so says, This life, like dew-drops, here, is "unreal"; Immaculate flowers my garden bears, Few days, lo, they fade and face burial... Lustrous desires seep in me like teabags, And stir "surreal" delights in my cup; When inner integrity gets in snags, Fancies occupy my mind and puff up... Earthly life, "Trancelike", is gifted to me, Like a gift I share it so blissfully; Affections, "Shadowy" pleasures hug me, I get rid of them rather so sadly... "Imaginary" Past, present, future, Years, eras, Times, and minutes are counted; And the Earth, Fire, Water, Sky, and Ether, Seen and unseen truths and marvels measured... "Ethereal" Divine interventions, Graces and gifts poured on me heaven-like; Life born "hazy" from Spirit's loveliness, Will reach Him, most soundly and angel-like. “Then the mystery was revealed to Daniel in a vision of the night.” (Daniel 2:19) 25 May 2021 Writing Prompt - Dreamlike - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 6/2/2021 3:28:00 PM
Christuraj, wonderful and congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Dreamlike - Challenge, peace _ Constance
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Date: 6/2/2021 2:53:00 PM
I love the way you dream your dreams Chris, you have a light touch, and a warriors heart, keep writing, the angels are smiling. :) Auguri Bravo
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Date: 6/2/2021 1:07:00 PM
Congratulations, well written.
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Date: 6/2/2021 2:41:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 6/2/2021 12:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. I like how you added Daniel 2:19. Have a blessed day....................
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Date: 6/2/2021 2:40:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 6/2/2021 12:30:00 PM
Congratulations for a deserved win Alex, and thanks for your visit to my page
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/2/2021 2:40:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 6/2/2021 12:30:00 PM
Wonderful! A marvellous surreal write Christuraj. Congratulations on a well deserved win in Constance’s contest… Belle
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Date: 5/25/2021 12:33:00 PM
Thank you Christuraj. "Lustrous desires seep in me like teabags," is a beautiful line.
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Date: 5/25/2021 1:13:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 5/25/2021 10:45:00 AM
Well penned Christiraj using all those chosen words... Loved the fourth stanza... God bless.. ~ Ani
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Date: 5/25/2021 11:36:00 AM
Thank you, Ani.
Date: 5/25/2021 7:49:00 AM
Beautiful thought are beautifully arranged... Amazing!
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 5/25/2021 8:58:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 5/25/2021 5:16:00 AM
A wonderful and thoughtful poem, Christuraj:)
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 5/25/2021 9:00:00 AM
Thank you very much.

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