Dreamlike

My fickle-minded, "dreamlike" self so says,
This life, like dew-drops, here, is "unreal";
Immaculate flowers my garden bears,
Few days, lo, they fade and face burial...

Lustrous desires seep in me like teabags,
And stir "surreal" delights in my cup;
When inner integrity gets in snags,
Fancies occupy my mind and puff up...

Earthly life, "Trancelike", is gifted to me,
Like a gift I share it so blissfully;
Affections, "Shadowy" pleasures hug me,
I get rid of them rather so sadly...

"Imaginary" Past, present, future,
Years, eras, Times, and minutes are counted;
And the Earth, Fire, Water, Sky, and Ether,
Seen and unseen truths and marvels measured...

"Ethereal" Divine interventions,
Graces and gifts poured on me heaven-like;
Life born "hazy" from Spirit's loveliness,
Will reach Him, most soundly and angel-like.


“Then the mystery was revealed to Daniel in a vision of the night.” (Daniel 2:19)



25 May 2021
Writing Prompt - Dreamlike - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France
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La France Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 3:28 PM
Christuraj, wonderful and congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Dreamlike - Challenge, peace _ Constance
Rose  Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 2:53 PM
I love the way you dream your dreams Chris, you have a light touch, and a warriors heart, keep writing, the angels are smiling. :) Auguri Bravo
Evans Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 1:07 PM
Congratulations, well written.
Alex Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 2:41 PM
Thank you very much.
Goldsmith Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 12:42 PM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. I like how you added Daniel 2:19. Have a blessed day....................
Alex Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 2:40 PM
Thank you very much.
Edmonds  Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 12:30 PM
Wonderful! A marvellous surreal write Christuraj. Congratulations on a well deserved win in Constance’s contest… Belle
Poet Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 12:30 PM
Congratulations for a deserved win Alex, and thanks for your visit to my page
Alex Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 2:40 PM
Thank you very much.
Rone Avatar
May 25, 2021 at 12:33 PM
Thank you Christuraj. "Lustrous desires seep in me like teabags," is a beautiful line.
Alex Avatar
May 25, 2021 at 1:13 PM
Thank you very much.
Jayasankar Avatar
May 25, 2021 at 10:45 AM
Well penned Christiraj using all those chosen words... Loved the fourth stanza... God bless.. ~ Ani
Alex Avatar
May 25, 2021 at 11:36 AM
Thank you, Ani.
Ade Avatar
May 25, 2021 at 7:49 AM
Beautiful thought are beautifully arranged... Amazing!
Alex Avatar
May 25, 2021 at 8:58 AM
Thank you.
Daniel Avatar
May 25, 2021 at 5:16 AM
A wonderful and thoughtful poem, Christuraj:)
Alex Avatar
May 25, 2021 at 9:00 AM
Thank you very much.
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