Dreaming Your Back

I just realised, I had my first dream, You were there by my side from the very first scene. I woke with the tears streaming all down my face, I squeezed my eyes shut to go back to that place. I recall we'd been given just one more day, We knew by nightfall you'd be taken away. sisters and brothers, all six of us there, All grabbing a second, we all want a share You thought we were odd because you didn't know, By the end of that day you would have to go. We were laughing and joking and trying to stay strong, We knew that this day wouldn't last very long. I'm praying tonight I'll be dreaming for sure, It's a place we can laugh and be with you once more. I could see your strong face as clear as can be, I know in my dream you were there with me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 3/21/2010 2:18:00 PM
A very sad happening..I hope you have healed and all you love is well. Light & Love
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Date: 3/20/2010 5:20:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poetry and I wish you a wonderful weekend filled with love and inspiration Carolyne. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/20/2010 4:18:00 PM
very good write,from the heart!thanks!
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Date: 3/20/2010 5:25:00 AM
Carolyne this write bought tears to my eyes - Thankyou for sharing such a heartfelt write -:)
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Date: 3/20/2010 4:49:00 AM
sad, my husband lost 2 of his brothers in the last 2 years and the anniversary is this month and he takes it real hard.
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Date: 3/20/2010 3:55:00 AM
So glad to have come across your poetry, Crolyne...I feel your loss. I once had a similar dream...that somehow God had 'changed the rules' and that she was back to stay - Tim
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