Dreaming With Your Eyes Wide Open

Have you ever tried to open a locked door without a key
Or had a dream while awake, going about your day
Optimism says, when one door closes another opens
It doesn’t prepare us for the day we find them all locked, but…
If you can dream awake, can’t you just unlock them in your sleep

Clichés are available in any situation
Heartbreak and failure seem to be the most common
Why do we need them? 
To misguide reality to a perspective of positivity. 
No one enjoys sadness, but fake emotion only extends that dimension,

What if we feel what we feel and we wear it on our sleeve
Are we then viewed as weak
Doesn’t anyone believe that feelings should be judgment free
Or is it better to pretend that in your heart, there’s no one home
Paste on a smile but truth never takes a vacation from your eyes

Pain worn on the skin does far less damage than pain held within
A year of tears that shed pounds as they fall, or
A lifetime of regret that won’t heal trapped without air, in a shell
If it were easy to get over then you wouldn’t be dreaming with your eyes wide open

The heartbeat gives rhythm to feet unwilling to head in the right direction 
When you’re done giving power to someone who doesn’t even want it.
You can see, missing pieces won’t make whole what been broken
So just leave the past where it started when life has spoken
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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April 20, 2016 at 1:39 AM
Gabrielle Charisse, nicely done. Glad to read your poem today. XoX *Linda*"
Mc Mills-Cooper Avatar
July 12, 2013 at 11:42 AM
"Pain worn on the skin does far less damage than pain held within" very nice. Well said and very true. Good poem!
Guzzi Avatar
July 6, 2013 at 11:21 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup. Very thoughtful verse.Light & Love
Lizzy Avatar
July 4, 2013 at 7:22 AM
wonderful
Bars Avatar
June 22, 2013 at 9:27 PM
Fairly deep but modest. It makes me think about certain things. Enjoy it.
Shelly Avatar
June 19, 2013 at 7:07 PM
Your verses are good I like them, but they're long. That's me, though, I hate long poetry. Your thoughts are plain to see and are ones we all share, but the little morals you leave are neat-- I like that. Be careful about what others tell you however. People on the 'soup see things through rose-colored glasses here. They won't give you the criticism you need in order to grow as an artist. Good-- popular-- art comes from reflection. You can't reflect if there is nothing to ponder.
Mc Mills-Cooper Avatar
July 12, 2013 at 11:51 AM
Gabe, you're right, criticism plays an immense part in growth and development. Maybe you might take a look at my work sometime. I write a lot of simple lovie-dovie stuff. It's a lot of my older stuff from the mid 90s, but most are my favorites. Sorry Gabrielle, didn't mean to hold a conversation on your comment wall. No disrespect to you or your work -again I thought your poem was very good!
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