Dreaming of You

I saw a shadow in the night
Opened the window, the sky was dark
But this figure of man was shining bright
Want to be abducted, I won't fright

I was dreaming of walking in the shore
Though I was always with a man with face unsure
His heart was like a water, so clear and pure
When he held my hands, I felt so secure.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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November 2, 2013 at 11:31 PM
Beth.:-) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the HOME PAGE.... always~ LINDA
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October 23, 2013 at 1:44 AM
Beth,, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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October 23, 2013 at 2:09 AM
You are right. I think I have found a great poet now, that's Skat. :-) Overwhelmed and blessed, those are just two feelings I felt so far after signing in. Thanks for the warm welcome expert Poets. Newbie here and looking forward to post more poems.
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October 22, 2013 at 10:05 PM
"A shadow in the night that can be clearly seen under the moonlight." Just noticed the irony of my poem. There should be a "Light" for the shadow to be seen. :-) Thanks Litan Dey.
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October 22, 2013 at 9:42 PM
Shadow of night and dreaming for love makes the poem cool romantic....Rocking entry with a nice poem in soup.All the best
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October 22, 2013 at 7:17 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup,Beth ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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October 22, 2013 at 8:56 PM
Thank you for the warm welcome Anne Lise. It's great to be part of this family. Cheers to all. :-) I will visit your page sometime to read your piece too. Thanks a lot.
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October 22, 2013 at 6:39 AM
graceful imagery, Elizabeth,, I like your first poetic piece on the site ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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October 22, 2013 at 9:00 PM
I do love to be part of this one big happy family, P-Soup. Thank you for welcoming me. I'm actually not a professional writer, I just express my feelings through writing.
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