Harrison Fairchild Poet Free verse

Dreaming of My Fate

I once had a dream
or was it a premonition

In it i saw two beings
one good
one evil

in the eyes of the evil one
I saw my fate
A horrible cruel existence
Beyond rust like black gates

A river of fire 
within it many souls
their screams never cease
So continue their mournful woes

I saw myself burning
screaming,bleeding,crying
Such suffering no words can describe
Torment never ending

In the eyes of the good one
i saw my fate
A joyful conclusion
Beyond this paradise's gates

A palace of clouds
within it many people
Their laughter is like music
In this world exist no evil

I saw myself laughing
My soul at peace
Such joy i can't put into words
Happiness does not cease

What is my fate
I saw the two sides
Which one do i get
When the flesh dies

I'll know someday
When my time arrives

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Fantise Mack February 21, 2011 at 6:07 AM I'm not sure if a 7 is good since I'm new here but i rate this a poem a 10. I love it =) you have an amazing gift. so far this is my fav =)

Duncan Chappell November 6, 2010 at 8:59 AM wow very nice write here my friend

Sara Kendrick October 5, 2010 at 6:26 AM You can have assurance my friend ...I hope that you know that...Interesting write that tells of the two ways or roads...We can only chose one..Sara

Poet Destroyer A October 4, 2010 at 11:51 PM wow! very amazing i feel as if it was a dream of a premonition myself. Enjoyed your poem,..p.d.

Carol Sunshine Brown October 4, 2010 at 10:48 AM From what I am reading this morning it looks as if everyone found some inspiration to write this weekend. Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us today Harrison. Love, Carol