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Dreaming of My Fate

I once had a dream or was it a premonition In it i saw two beings one good one evil in the eyes of the evil one I saw my fate A horrible cruel existence Beyond rust like black gates A river of fire within it many souls their screams never cease So continue their mournful woes I saw myself burning screaming,bleeding,crying Such suffering no words can describe Torment never ending In the eyes of the good one i saw my fate A joyful conclusion Beyond this paradise's gates A palace of clouds within it many people Their laughter is like music In this world exist no evil I saw myself laughing My soul at peace Such joy i can't put into words Happiness does not cease What is my fate I saw the two sides Which one do i get When the flesh dies I'll know someday When my time arrives

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Date: 2/21/2011 6:07:00 AM
I'm not sure if a 7 is good since I'm new here but i rate this a poem a 10. I love it =) you have an amazing gift. so far this is my fav =)
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Date: 11/6/2010 8:59:00 AM
wow very nice write here my friend
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Date: 10/5/2010 6:26:00 AM
You can have assurance my friend ...I hope that you know that...Interesting write that tells of the two ways or roads...We can only chose one..Sara
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Date: 10/4/2010 11:51:00 PM
wow! very amazing i feel as if it was a dream of a premonition myself. Enjoyed your poem,..p.d.
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Date: 10/4/2010 10:48:00 AM
From what I am reading this morning it looks as if everyone found some inspiration to write this weekend. Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us today Harrison. Love, Carol
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