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The setting sun swings from gold To deepen into bloodshot red. And as I sit alone upon the sand, Of a long forgotten inlet bay, I feel its fainting warmth, its ending joy, As ill-omened gulls glide overhead And screech away their hideous song. I gaze into the gathering gloom, I see your face, lovely and fresh, And feel your soft and tender skin, So velvety under my caressing hands; O how I wish and yearn you were with me To share the sun's last warm embrace, To let you mesmerize me with kisses sweet, To dream with love the night away with me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 6/7/2021 1:43:00 AM
Sad and beautiful Victor, lovely words and picture… Belle
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Date: 6/5/2021 10:50:00 PM
I love to hear the sea gulls. A very sad poem, of the one you love. They are never forgotten. <3
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Date: 6/5/2021 4:38:00 PM
Hi Victor, I found your verse to lovely, romantic and a bit sad. I enjoyed the read. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis
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Date: 6/5/2021 11:38:00 AM
A beautifully written, yet melancholy write, Victor! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 6/5/2021 11:09:00 AM
A beautiful and romantic verse, touched with sadness. True love never dies, my friend. Blessings, Evelyn
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Date: 6/5/2021 7:34:00 AM
This is such a sad and lonely piece Victor. Filled with longing for a love that has been taken from you. You will see each other again my friend. God Bless, JB
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Date: 6/5/2021 7:25:00 AM
Nostalgia of days gone by ... beautifully penned, Victor! Hope you are well.
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Date: 6/5/2021 7:38:00 AM
Much better, thanks.
Date: 6/5/2021 6:59:00 AM
A sweet romantic verse with great imagery Victor... God bless... ~ Ani
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Date: 6/5/2021 5:24:00 AM
Great imagery in this saddened theme. Well articulated, emotive write, Victor.
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Date: 6/5/2021 4:33:00 AM
I hope you have a long and healthy life. I know you cannot shield yourself from sadness because everything comes from the heart. You penned a great poem, Victor. Nothing can heal the senses but the soul, blessings
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Date: 6/5/2021 3:08:00 AM
Ah! Sad and yearning for what cannot be! Wish life were easier..
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Date: 6/5/2021 1:59:00 AM
A sad scene Victor, dreaming of what could have been. Tom
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