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A poem inspired by a contest before with a theme, Dreaming Into The Day. But it was late for the entry.

He used to look at me straight into my gloomy eyes, In his sweet words and kisses and in his lovely arms I felt so nice; We were filled with gladness, with promises and future plans, Until I’ve found out that he’s a sky and I’m just a piece of land. He is a sun who’s shining brightly into the limelight, While I’m a little star aspiring to shine both day and night; He’s a prince who cannot eat without his golden spoon While I use pottery in yeoman’s house who is forlorn. How can a lard coagulate with water? If lightning strikes as prominent as the roar of thunder? How can it be the two of us if there are many barriers? I’m crying inside and I need prayers to become stronger. Everything about you will all remain in my dreams, Those promises of you, I’ll sing always in my mind as hymns; I want to blame myself in possession of this loving heart, Which little by little is killing me in suffocation all throughout.
July 6, 2013 2.23pm ( a poem not posted before for a contest. a fiction) NOT FOR A CONTEST

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/24/2014 11:09:00 PM
What a Poem to read, to admire and to preserve as a piece of beauty and emotions. The Poem is blended with a touch of sadness and pathos, when one reaches the extreme end of your Poem. It was a joy to read such refreshing lines Leonora. Great write my friend and congrats for your well deserving 1st place win in PD's contest. This goes as a favorite Poem. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra K Kapoor
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Date: 4/23/2014 7:47:00 PM
Such a gorgeous poem, congratulations on your win :D
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Date: 4/22/2014 1:54:00 PM
Lovely, romantic and somewhat sad poem Leonora! In fairytales the prince and poor beautiful lass usually have a happy ending:) // congrats on your win. // paul
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Date: 4/22/2014 11:01:00 AM
It's so amazing!!! ..impressive lines, words and theme... "the langit ka at lupa ako... " I hope all is fair in LOVE... Well done, Leo!!! Congratz on your sweet win dear friend!! I miss You!! :O))
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Date: 4/22/2014 9:33:00 AM
Congratulation on the fine win with this lovely poem, Leo
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Date: 4/22/2014 5:43:00 AM
Lovely poem Leonora,,, loved this one,,wonderfully done,,, Congrats on ur top placement !
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Date: 4/22/2014 3:30:00 AM
This is lovey and tugs at the heart with emotion Leonora. I hope you are well and will be filled with inspiration soon.
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Date: 4/21/2014 9:23:00 PM
Hello My sweet sis... Happy to see you enter my contest again.... This time with a rocking # 1.... Thank you ever so much, my BFF,,, Congratulations, with your awesome win. It's an honor in having you support my contest. Sending Hugs... Wonderful imagery, deep... my dear... XOX~ forever your best friend.. Linda
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Date: 1/26/2014 8:28:00 AM
My, my, this is special. It is both romantic and sad, I was moved by the depth of your emotions. This is a piece to be proud of.
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Date: 1/26/2014 8:51:00 AM
Thank u so much my dear friend Richard. Biggest hugs to u! I'll be back to visit your poem very soon. Have a nice wkend to u and your love ones!
Date: 1/26/2014 7:15:00 AM
Leonora, I'm moved by the poem very blue. nice to read a poem by you this beautiful morning. Skat
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Date: 1/26/2014 8:39:00 AM
Have a nice weekend to you and your love ones/family my dearest Skat! Tcare care always!
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Date: 1/26/2014 8:20:00 AM
Thank u so much my dearest poet sis & friend Skat. Biggest hugs!
Date: 1/26/2014 1:27:00 AM
Hello Leonora, just checking on ya.' don't stay to long bereft/folorn tomorrow holds another dawn, keep well Joe..)
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Date: 1/26/2014 8:22:00 AM
Thank u so much my dear friend Joe. Biggest hugs to u! I will come back soon to visit your poetry my very dear friend.
Date: 1/25/2014 5:29:00 PM
Leonora opposites do attract so they say, I like the question throughout your poem...David
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Date: 1/26/2014 8:23:00 AM
Thank u so much my dear friend David. Biggest hugs to u! I'll come back soon to visit your poetry.
Date: 1/24/2014 3:59:00 PM
What a great poem. Its nice reading your piece once again. Keep on writing please.
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Date: 1/26/2014 8:24:00 AM
Thank u so much my dear friend Funom. Biggest hugs to u! I'll come back to visit your poetry soon.
Date: 1/23/2014 8:29:00 AM
Good morning, Leo my sweet BFF..... Stopping in to see if you have a new poem posted. Miss hearing from you this week, I hope everything is fine. Drop by with a hello, missing you my BFF..... always~ LINDA
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Date: 1/26/2014 8:40:00 AM
TYSM for your precious time stopping by my dearest sis and BFF! .Biggest hugs to u! I Miss u. I'm so sorry if I've just came now. Got a terrible cough & cold for almost 1 wk yet I still went to schl. I went to my dr. & she gave me soporific medicines making me feel drowsy most of time time esp. in the evening- a restraint then of my visit here for past few days:((.. I hope you're doing fine as well. Have a nice wkend to u & your love ones! Tcare always!
Date: 1/20/2014 11:44:00 PM
Hello, sis... Stopping by to bother your poem. Again:).... How are you? Hoping you are taking care of yourself my BFF.... I'm visiting some of the new poets, tonight. I did not want to log off without stopping by to say hi.. Talk to you soon....xox...Linda
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Date: 1/26/2014 8:47:00 AM
Thank you my everdearest sis & BFF! More loving hugs to u & your family! Have a nice weekend to all. I'm getting better now. Thank u so much for everything. I love you all!
Date: 1/19/2014 2:43:00 PM
Well; I'm glad that it's fiction, but than it don't cost nothing to dream. Have a great day and sweet dreams... Lucilla
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Date: 1/26/2014 8:49:00 AM
Thank u so much my dear friend Lucilla. Biggest hugs! Hope you are doing well. Have a nice weekend to u & your love ones.
Date: 1/16/2014 2:09:00 PM
This is nice
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Date: 1/18/2014 4:06:00 AM
Thank you dear friend James.
Date: 1/14/2014 12:19:00 PM
Leo, I haven't felt like this over a guy in such a long time... LOL< Unique line... Mind as hymns <--- a sweet sounding touch. My sweet bff... That sweet land sounds very romantic.. thank you for everything, every smile, every comment. Plus, our off the soup friendship, in which you will always have... Hope to hear from you soon.. Talk to you later.. Poetry sis and bff... Linda
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Date: 1/18/2014 4:12:00 AM
Thank you so much for dropping by my dearest sis & BFF. Biggest hugs! I miss you & also everyone here. Hope you're doing well. I'm stopping by here for a moment before I leave for an appointment with friends. I'll try to come back tom., Sun. Thank you so much for your precious time reading & commenting my poem. This is only a fiction my dearest sis. Sending u again my love & hugs to you & ur family. l tcare always.
Date: 1/13/2014 11:09:00 PM
A wonderful one dearest friend,just be strong and believe in miracles,you see that even the sky can come to the land....doesn't the rain come from the sky to water the land? Believe my dear friend and cry no more. Love alwaz, Based on Belief
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Date: 1/18/2014 4:13:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by my dearest friend Bob. This is only a fiction.
Date: 1/13/2014 2:08:00 PM
This is a very nice one, a write of a little melancholy, but very attractive! Leonora, sweetie, you not 'just' a piece of land.. Land is rich, and so are you,glorious! And 'love',, one is always so vulnerable in love, it's Bad ;), inside, you're all messed up.. Still, better to have gone down that lane, and not mend a broken heart.. that would be so romantic! (Hope this was just for creative expression) Hugs!
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Len Gasun
Date: 1/18/2014 4:15:00 AM
Thank you so much my dear friend Gautami. This is an unposted poem. i'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 1/13/2014 9:56:00 AM
This is a very sentimental write my friend! I truly enjoyed reading this enjoyable and fascinating poem here this morning! What a glorious piece this one is, such a terrific poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 1/18/2014 4:16:00 AM
Thank you so much my very dear friend Russell. Have a great wkend!

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