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Dreaming I Can Fly

dreaming I can fly arms outstretched I’m flying high my spirit and I dreaming I can fly luna love she sends to me moonbeams pass me by dreaming I can fly spaceships zooming I espy blinking of an eye dreaming I can fly zillion stars lighten my way turning night to day dreaming I can fly looking down on earth below cherishing life's worth rousing from my dream will folks doubt when I tell them sights that I have seen loving life on earth but crave my nightly flights to sate my soul each night Written 21st July 2019 Contest: Multiple Haikus Sponsor: Jamie Pan Syllables Per Line: 5 7 5 0 5 7 5 0 5 7 5 0 5 7 5 0 5 7 5 0 5 7 5 0 5 7 5 Contest Name STRAND SELECT 5 Sponsor Brian Strand HONORABLE MENTION

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John Watt

Date: 4/27/2020 11:34:00 PM

Your string of pearls about flying is so delightful, my Sky Friend! I think it must be everybody's favorite dream (though I don't stay asleep long enough anymore to have many dreams, alas!) You brought in some nice aspects of the sky: the stars and "luna love", as well as the enchanting elation of looking down upon the earth! A charming write, Ann.

Ann Gilmour
Date: 4/29/2020 5:11:00 PM

Bless you dear John for your wonderful comments, and I loved the 'string of pearls' ... You have such a way with words and I thank you dear friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

David Smith

Date: 3/29/2020 2:55:00 AM

I think most will relate to this beautifully penned piece. Like your original style which is timeless. Best regards David in NZ

Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/30/2020 4:34:00 AM

How lovely to hear your most encouraging words David - thank you so much my friend it is good to meet you. With kindest thoughts from the UK Ann xx

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 1/7/2020 9:57:00 PM

Beautiful! Sincere congratulations for your Honorable Mention in Brian's contest, Ann - keep the ink flowing, my friend, and best wishes for a bountiful and healthy New Year. Blessings! :o) <3

Ann Gilmour
Date: 1/7/2020 10:15:00 PM

Thank you Greg for your encouraging comments. I really appreciate them coming from you my friend - thank you! Happy and Healthy New year to you and yours, with kindest thoughts Ann xx

J.W. Earnings

Date: 8/2/2019 6:54:00 AM

Awe-inspiring and magnificient poem...a daydreamer's favorite dream. :) A child's favorite dream too.

Ann Gilmour
Date: 8/2/2019 6:33:00 PM

Thank so much for your lovely comments JW. I really appreciate your visit and so nice to meet you. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/27/2019 4:52:00 AM

I still dream this because I believe our souls do fly at night when we dream. A lovely series of haiku, lovely! Well done!

Ann Gilmour
Date: 7/27/2019 5:09:00 AM

Many thanks Caren for your most welcome visit and lovely comments. It is the sheer freedom of flying like a bird that is so appealing to me and as a child I had these dreams, but sadly they no longer happen - but I live in hope! Kindest thoughts Ann xx

Jan Allison

Date: 7/24/2019 5:17:00 PM

I think many of us have certainly dreamed we can fly I know I used to as a child:-) a lovely string of haiku Ann:-) hugs jan xx

Ann Gilmour
Date: 7/24/2019 5:43:00 PM

Thank you so much Jan I really appreciate your comments and visit. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/24/2019 1:55:00 PM

- Dear Ann, this is "my winning poem" ... wonderful :) - What a wonderful dream :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ann Gilmour
Date: 7/24/2019 3:21:00 PM

Wow Anne-Lise what a compliment - thank you so much! and really glad you like my haikus. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 7/23/2019 3:03:00 AM

Nice one Ann, when I fly abroad always astounded how this big bird can stay so high up here. Dream on!

Ann Gilmour
Date: 7/23/2019 3:26:00 PM

Thank you so much Gordon for your lovely visit and comments. Hoping you are well and enjoying all the heat - phew! With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/22/2019 5:30:00 AM

Ann, I was so caught up in flying with you that I did not notice these were haiku. Good luck in the contest my friend!

Ann Gilmour
Date: 7/23/2019 3:24:00 PM

How wonderful Caren! Thank you so much for your good luck and lovely comments. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Panagiota Romios

Date: 7/21/2019 6:10:00 PM

Well done, Anne! Good lock Can I fly with you! Panagiota

Ann Gilmour
Date: 7/21/2019 6:12:00 PM

Flying in tandem, sounds like fun Panagiota , Haha. Thank you so much for your lovely comment. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Arturo Michael

Date: 7/21/2019 6:06:00 PM

Lovely...dreaming I can fly...wonderful concept and delivery...

Ann Gilmour
Date: 7/21/2019 6:08:00 PM

Thank you so much Arturo, I really appreciate your comments. With kindest thoughts Ann xx