Dreaming All Day

A fog comes over my thoughts
a dreary little wisp of different lots
heaven comes down with the rays of sun
and I sit alone till the dreaming is done

There I walk the banks of streams
where love is lost among the dreams
I return during day a far removed walk
of life which exceeds like a bloom in chalk

Green of the mint smashed scent as I tread
An angel there holds my hand gentle as a thread
Moon is high in the afternoon sky of clouds and sun
Blue is the sky reflecting my shining thoughts of fun

Bring your smile and a glow upon your face
I will remain by the side where I can place
Come away with me tonight 
We will walk until the dark fades to light

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 11/27/2017 10:51:00 PM
Nicely written. Quite amusing.
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Date: 7/18/2017 11:02:00 AM
I love a dreamer. Since I retired I have come to value my time alone with my thoughts. The inner mind is as big as the outer space of the Cosmos. Nice write Bic. God Bless. D.
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Date: 7/13/2017 12:22:00 PM
This was really nicely done. I enjoyed this.
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