Dreaming a Dream

The dream to me seemed so real
It started off with such a thrill
Hiking in the woods alone
In geography to me unknown

Looking at fauna new to me
I did not see him behind the trees
A madman with an axe in hand
Came charging at me with wild abandon

The axe buried deep in my head
At that moment I knew I was dead
Then my wife shook me awake
It was all a dream, this terror a fake

I was telling her about my dream
And how real the terror seemed
When a shadow came up from behind
And again the murderer my eyes did find

My wife did not see him coming
The axe swung with an awful humming
Her head fell onto my lap
I saw blood dripping from his axe

Reality was mirroring my awful dream
Before it hit me I let out a scream
Then I woke up in my bed for real
Or did I?...Perhaps I am dreaming still
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Macfarlane Avatar
March 15, 2012 at 6:59 PM
Wow....that was quite a twist...enjoyed it immensely!
Brown Avatar
August 14, 2010 at 9:13 AM
Congratulations Joe on your win in Nikko Palmario's contest "Twist and SHOCK" Love, Carol
Fraser Avatar
August 8, 2010 at 8:32 AM
Many congratulations Joe on your win in Nikko's fine contest with this scary dream >> James
Mehta Avatar
August 7, 2010 at 9:43 PM
Congrats on the win, Joe
Sweetheart Avatar
August 7, 2010 at 12:15 PM
Congrats Joe on your winning poem in the Twist and Shock contest with another exceptional write and super win today.. enjoy my friend..with luv..
K. Avatar
August 7, 2010 at 10:10 AM
Gory and gripping Joe! twisted dream within a dream perhaps? Congrats on your win with this write of yours! -- nikko :)
Devonshire Avatar
July 18, 2010 at 1:22 PM
Oh my goodness, there was a maniac with an axe in my poem for Lights Out, Joe. Very interesting dream that I'm sure Freud would love to analyze. Your honor in the anti-slam limericks contest remains, Joe. People here write all sorts of things just for the contests. I do the same. Bless you for always making me laugh out loud with your amazing limericks! Love, Carolyn
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July 18, 2010 at 12:13 PM
Make a good late night movie... great write My friend,,, Michael
Roberts Avatar
July 18, 2010 at 9:27 AM
ooh, a bit of a thriller this one, enjoyed it
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