Dreaming

as i look out into the green fields.
purple flowers surround me 
dragonflies all around, the lake infront of me were we will laugh,throw out fishing poles catch fish also make so much soul feed imprints on our land.  my soul soaks up  the sun
shinning right on me 
beautiful looking out in my glorious field of jasmine blossoms.
my eyes right set on our dream home 
imagine all the memories we will make in this beautiful
senery of our life .
god knew he had us he made sure that his angels were granted a key 
upon all.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 9/29/2017 11:27:00 AM
it all came upon the way my hertt tells me to go i dont hve to think about it it just comes my poety
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Date: 8/22/2017 9:12:00 AM
A very beautiful written poem, as you ask that why I like your poems, I muat tell you that your poem here contain so much imaginations and you ve done a very good job by explaining them so well and clearly, so you should be proud of yourself as poetey is all about been clear about your feelings, yeah try to write the g capital of God and He also as He s unique, one more thing, plz read my poems as well and tell me how they are, I ll really appreciate your time
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