Dreaming

Whispers in the dark
bound by narrow edges,
scenic vista's flicker, 
sans reality.

Drifting thru passages
featured in cryptic messages, 
illustrated in absurdities.

Complex abstract thoughts,
distorted impressions
and twisted meanings.

Fits of restless writhing
shackled by the depth.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
June 10, 2026 at 1:22 PM
loved the subtle surrealism in your poem. The ending lines are powerful. Wishing you well.
Hughes Avatar
June 10, 2026 at 3:55 PM
Thank you Sara, hope you are doing well!
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