Dreaming

I have been dreaming,
That I found a lover full of love and compassion,
A beautiful mirage in my deserted life.

Sometimes dreams seem to be tuning into reality,
A beacon of hope shines on my stranded boat,
Unluckily I lose the sight in rough seas of emotions,
As realities take over sweet imaginations.

As a marooned sailor of the lonely ship,
I would hang on to the lonely beach,
I would keep dreaming on for the daring rescue,
For if the dreams die, I will fade away like a sea shell in the ocean.

6/1/2023
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Dietrich Avatar
May 29, 2023 at 6:30 PM
FINE work. Fine work indeed.
Narain Avatar
May 30, 2023 at 9:38 AM
Thanks Andrea. Your encouragements help me a lot,
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May 29, 2023 at 12:20 PM
Nicely penned poem, Jay. Enjoyed so much reading your love-dreaming poem.
Narain Avatar
May 30, 2023 at 9:39 AM
Thanks Sotto. It is nice to see some kind words from a great poet,
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