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Dreaming

Author: Fernando Lachica Poem: Dreaming I, for one....dreaming to become what I want to be The vastness of it comes solely from what God had given me No matter what....no matter when....no matter how... I will give meaning to my life. Dreaming is not about something big and beautiful Dreaming is not always a bed of roses Dreaming is not wealth, fame, or power But a step forward for your life to go on....and on... Until...one day...you realize...that you are making your own destiny... Life is what you make it Life is when you decide something for yourself Life is loving someone near to your heart Life is knowing God's commandments And, you are solely responsible for your life. So, now, make the most of it while you're still young It won't come back a second or two To make a life of your own?...still dreaming?... Wake up and stand for yourself.... No matter what...no matter when...no matter how... Dreaming...the way dreamers often do?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/18/2009 6:17:00 AM
yes wake..wake...be....go...make! Light & Love
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Date: 5/2/2009 10:58:00 AM
This need to be reworked, honestly. I found this amateurish and high-school-ish. Good attempt and message though, but lacks poetic artistry.
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Date: 4/28/2009 4:22:00 PM
You have sent a good message in your poem. God bless you. Keep Writing. Welcome to Poetry Soup. Lovingly, Dane
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Date: 4/28/2009 12:25:00 PM
I like this and find inspiration in it too. nicely penned fellow dreamer.
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Date: 4/28/2009 9:05:00 AM
Nice poem well done. I enjoyed the read and the message. Excellent job.
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