Dreamin Again

If I were to slit my wrist
Your life would be gone 
You see, i can't be your dream

Im more than halfway dead
Your dream is a lie,
Until that last slit across
My vein will draw the 
Blood of hopelessness.
Your rose pricked my tears
And cold night dreams,
Rests ever so softly on my coffin
Still as your lying dream.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Nutter Avatar
July 8, 2010 at 6:10 PM
Emotional write sad, yet enjioyable to read. Been on the brink before realizing that taking ones own life is not an answer nor an end. The only person punished is the person who harms themselves.
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July 8, 2010 at 5:06 PM
So enjoyed reading your extremely creative write tonight.. nothing is as bad as it seems ..u have expressed a tender subject so well. with luv..
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July 8, 2010 at 4:58 PM
Kinda sad that one would be in a relationship that has gotten to this point of emotion..Enjoyed the read..Sara
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