Dreamgirl

shocking the rhapsody of her soul, the multi-faceted jewels — layer upon layer. the hyper-hues of depth and kaleidoscopic threat. would she absorb or attack those who dare to penetrate her contorted web. where does one begin. should she step gently or slingshot her way into this trippy ethereality. the dreamgirl satisfies with innuendos — questions do not breathe. she merely undulates in the sinews of the matrix.

10/19/2019
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October 20, 2019 at 11:58 AM
That opening line is poetry at its best.. nice choice of words for this one...
Rodrigues Avatar
October 20, 2019 at 7:48 PM
Thank you so much, my friend!
Ball Avatar
October 20, 2019 at 12:21 AM
Hmmm Sounds like one of those dreams that leave you thinking" What was that ?"after you wake up. Really clever write. God Bless, JB
Rodrigues Avatar
October 20, 2019 at 7:30 AM
Thank you, Judy!
Wolf Avatar
October 19, 2019 at 9:54 PM
A true dream-girl have you described. Far, far beyond the pale versions I/we all are used to. Bravo! Best of everything, Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
October 20, 2019 at 7:30 AM
Thank you, Gershon! :)
Aurora Avatar
October 19, 2019 at 5:21 PM
Hi Kim. You have some amazing phrasing in this that I love. 'Rhapsody of her soul' 'kaleidoscopic threat' but 'undulates in the sinews of the matrix' is my favourite. This poem really made me think! Really enjoyed!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 19, 2019 at 5:33 PM
Thank you, Aurora!
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 19, 2019 at 4:55 PM
Hello Kim, the dream girl should should do her own thing. Have a nice day my friend.
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October 22, 2019 at 12:22 PM
Yes i did and have enjoyed. Have a nic3 day my friend.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 19, 2019 at 4:56 PM
Hope you enjoyed
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