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Dreamgirl

shocking the rhapsody of her soul, the multi-faceted jewels — layer upon layer. the hyper-hues of depth and kaleidoscopic threat. would she absorb or attack those who dare to penetrate her contorted web. where does one begin. should she step gently or slingshot her way into this trippy ethereality. the dreamgirl satisfies with innuendos — questions do not breathe. she merely undulates in the sinews of the matrix. 10/19/2019

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Date: 10/20/2019 11:58:00 AM
That opening line is poetry at its best.. nice choice of words for this one...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/20/2019 7:48:00 PM
Thank you so much, my friend!
Date: 10/20/2019 12:21:00 AM
Hmmm Sounds like one of those dreams that leave you thinking" What was that ?"after you wake up. Really clever write. God Bless, JB
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/20/2019 7:30:00 AM
Thank you, Judy!
Date: 10/19/2019 9:54:00 PM
A true dream-girl have you described. Far, far beyond the pale versions I/we all are used to. Bravo! Best of everything, Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/20/2019 7:30:00 AM
Thank you, Gershon! :)
Date: 10/19/2019 5:21:00 PM
Hi Kim. You have some amazing phrasing in this that I love. 'Rhapsody of her soul' 'kaleidoscopic threat' but 'undulates in the sinews of the matrix' is my favourite. This poem really made me think! Really enjoyed!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/19/2019 5:33:00 PM
Thank you, Aurora!
Date: 10/19/2019 4:55:00 PM
Hello Kim, the dream girl should should do her own thing. Have a nice day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/22/2019 12:22:00 PM
Yes i did and have enjoyed. Have a nic3 day my friend.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/19/2019 4:56:00 PM
Hope you enjoyed

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