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Dreamers Adrift on Waft Canvas

Near ocean surf, buds bloom. Duet-sashay in silky dress. Side to side sway of locks. Teeny feet in tall grass. Brunette and strawberry blonde. Pinwheel-limbs like pale ballerinas. Midnight-bare without glass, Fairy-soles in overgrown freesia. Sisters in momentum of glee. Brushed eyes, opened and closed. Dreamers adrift on waft canvas. Ebb-flow of pink stars, superimposed.

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Date: 11/17/2024 11:53:00 AM
Now I wonder what work of art this is describing. I enjoyed reading about the tiny feet in tall grasses. Thanks for sharing. Sara K
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/17/2024 5:24:00 PM
Sometimes I find an inspirational painting on Pinterest but am not sure who the artist is. It is not always obvious. Otherwise I would have shared. Thank you, Sara!
Date: 11/17/2024 7:55:00 AM
Brilliant imagery, I wonder who's dreaming. Great poem.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/17/2024 10:24:00 AM
Glad you’re wondering :) Thank you, my friend!
Date: 11/16/2024 7:39:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this wonderful write/story. What a picture you have written here. Love the ending...  Have a blessed day/weekend writing away..................
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/17/2024 10:24:00 AM
Glad you liked the endi g! Blessings on this lovely Sunday!
Date: 11/16/2024 4:54:00 AM
Such a lovely poem....
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/17/2024 10:25:00 AM
Thank you so much! Makes my heart glad that upyou like it! :)
Date: 11/15/2024 8:34:00 PM
Some sweet imagery . I imagine two sisters like ballerinas.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/17/2024 10:25:00 AM
Thank you! Glad you can visualize, Andrea!
Date: 11/15/2024 6:37:00 PM
Oh, wow- this is lovely work. Kim! What a poet sense you have- hey, I am going to comment back to you on my last poem, so check it out... always enjoy reading you...you know it <3
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/15/2024 7:25:00 PM
I really thank you, Paige! xx

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