Kim Rodrigues Poet Ekphrasis

Dreamers Adrift on Waft Canvas

Near ocean surf, buds bloom.
Duet-sashay in silky dress.
Side to side sway of locks.
Teeny feet in tall grass.

Brunette and strawberry blonde.
Pinwheel-limbs like pale ballerinas.
Midnight-bare without glass,
Fairy-soles in overgrown freesia.

Sisters in momentum of glee.
Brushed eyes, opened and closed.
Dreamers adrift on waft canvas.
Ebb-flow of pink stars, superimposed.

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Sara Kendrick November 17, 2024 at 11:53 AM Now I wonder what work of art this is describing. I enjoyed reading about the tiny feet in tall grasses. Thanks for sharing. Sara K Kim Rodrigues November 17, 2024 at 5:24 PM Sometimes I find an inspirational painting on Pinterest but am not sure who the artist is. It is not always obvious. Otherwise I would have shared. Thank you, Sara!

Victor Buhagiar November 17, 2024 at 7:55 AM Brilliant imagery, I wonder who's dreaming. Great poem. Kim Rodrigues November 17, 2024 at 10:24 AM Glad you’re wondering :) Thank you, my friend!

Paula Goldsmith November 16, 2024 at 7:39 AM I enjoyed reading this wonderful write/story. What a picture you have written here. Love the ending...  Have a blessed day/weekend writing away.................. Kim Rodrigues November 17, 2024 at 10:24 AM Glad you liked the endi g! Blessings on this lovely Sunday!

Silent One November 16, 2024 at 4:54 AM Such a lovely poem.... Kim Rodrigues November 17, 2024 at 10:25 AM Thank you so much! Makes my heart glad that upyou like it! :)

Andrea Dietrich November 15, 2024 at 8:34 PM Some sweet imagery . I imagine two sisters like ballerinas. Kim Rodrigues November 17, 2024 at 10:25 AM Thank you! Glad you can visualize, Andrea!

Paige Hind November 15, 2024 at 6:37 PM Oh, wow- this is lovely work. Kim! What a poet sense you have- hey, I am going to comment back to you on my last poem, so check it out... always enjoy reading you...you know it <3 Kim Rodrigues November 15, 2024 at 7:25 PM I really thank you, Paige! xx